I'm only on Chapter Three of this story, but I gotta tell ya, so far it's fantastic! You've done such a great job of injecting some more "mature" and realistic thinking into Classic MOTU. I have to take a break from it (as Real Life beckons), but I'm looking forward to tackling more of it later!
(as well as your other fics)

This was a rollercoaster of emotions, and great fun as well. Bravo!

Wow, I love the discussion about how those who love Adam will eventually figure out his secret. Very plausible, and very satisfying!

...and that's the $64,0 question, isn't it?

LOL, even He-Man wants to 'chicken out' when it comes to explanations...

Yay! =D

Woohoo!! =D

Ew, creepy!He-Man gives me the shivers!

Very interesting twist, making Adam relive his bad memories...

I like the humanity you've given Adam, and the nod about the psychological effects of his dual identity was very deft. Nicely done.

Wow! You've got me hooked, that's for sure.

This very well could have happened...being a royal prince is definitely dangerous, but being Adam is doubly dangerous!

I loved the Sorceress' clever distraction, even though it was sad: "He-Man is very far away, and even I cannot reach him." Well, she didn't lie, really...and her magical 'moving on' gesture. I'm sure she doesn't like having to alter things like that but it's a necessary evil at the moment.

I can almost see the surprise on Adam's face when he discovers the Sword is gone.

Nice job!

what a great story and what a great way to introduce myself into the world of he-man fanfiction...i really loved this story and im off to read the next one

I have to say, this is a great story! I am on my way to read 'Discoveries' now! Keep up the great work!

Oh, this was absolutely awesome! I always thought there would come a time when Adam would "crash" because of everything he had to carry because of his responsibility as He-Man. Living a double identity is qutie an undertaking, and inevitibly, a mistake would be made or something would just have to give. I loved how you brought up Adam's issues of self doubt and tied them in with He-Man being so physically weak. I have "Discoveries" up next to read, adn I can't wait. You are a wonderful writer. :)

First part, amazing..can't wait to read the rest..Off I go!

Very good story. One of the problems with writing about He-Man and She-Ra (at least one I have) is that they're so powerful it's hard to keep the tension and suspense up since they can easily get out of any physical problem. Therefore some of the best fiction is that which deals with they're more vulnerable side like this one.

At the same time it can turn bad if they become manically depressed as tends to happen sometimes. Thankfully you managed to find and maintain a balance throughout.

I enjoyed this story and have already begun reading Discoveries

Excellent story, i loved all the words u wrote! i hope in ur sequel u let Teela and Randor find out who Adam Really is!