I love that fanfic please update soon and I'm really curious how that whole threads of fate will resolve.

I like this story. So much has changed from what we call 'canon' that even I can't predict where it's going.

Bwhaa haa haa. Ranma is Chibi-Usa's father. Can't wait to see more.

Hmm, this will be interesting... :)

Megatyrant out.

Hmm, interesting. Thanks for writing this, bye for now.

It's great to see you back writing once again.

I was a little confused at he beginning of the chapter, But as I got a little further in things clicked together and made sense to me.

Great chapter, looking forward to even more new chapters!

Update as time allows (man now I'm using that damn line again)

Very nice, confusing at the end, but enjoyable.

*facefault* He just had to ask... lol. Good chapter. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Heh Hi Daddy... great way to end the chapter and leave us wanting more!


Thanks for the update!

Nice start, but needs more. Please finish or at least add to it. Even an outline would be nice.

on chapter 4 i meant i read the whole thing please update more

i all the whole thing awesome story please update more

"already being able to red and write." -- ironic humor -- I'm sure you meant "read".

An amusing and original tale, but everyone is too OOC...
Mike

great story, but why hasnt it been updated lately? I hope up begin working on it again soon

Short chapters, but certainly entertaining. The biggest issue I see is somehow Nabiki set all this stuff up and was apparently interested in it being more than a useful fiction, yet didn't tell him until Rei turns up pregnant? The combination seems unlikely. The most honorable thing to do is to probably have his marriage to Nabiki annuled so he could marry Rei, if Nabiki and him have never been together. It seems more likely that all three will end up together. Still, I'm curious how this plays out.

I suppose the other thing from a consitency point of view is it just seems more likely that his one daughters skills are magical in nature, and there is no reason to believe that just anyone can learn them, yet Ranma did, and learned lots of variations as well. It might have been more realistic if Nabiki and such just learned ki based arts. It is not as if Nabiki would need even that much to beat Akane. Come to think of it there is the ogre Akane thing going on. Even if you accept that she was like that in canon, which I don't think was accurate, then being the same five years later seems unlikely.

At any rate, this was a fun read and I look forward to more chapters.

good so far even if the chapters are a way to short for my taste