wait, what? that was...the most complete turn around of a story that i have ever seen! im so,..astonished that im holding back tears. literally! i...i MUST know what happens. i dont know...he has to have some motive. i mean. u cant just make him EVIL. no, no, he had to be forced, something, like hisana would be promised to become alive again, SOMETHING!! all in all, it was greatly written though...oh my god, im am SO stunned right now, u have to update u have to u have to!

--(freaking!) BTR

These are beautiful!! Keep writing!

Girlblue

this is really good so far, please update soon!

I. Love. Evil!Byakuya. (For the idea of it, and for a more shallow reason... *lol*)

Really, it might be a little far-fetched, but I think you made it as realistic and as in-character as it's possible to write it, especially considering Byakuya's being given a trait completely the opposite to those he possesses.

The reasons you gave for his discarding Rukia so carelessly made sense (I always see him as too proud for his own good.) and of the captains he would kill for no reason, Hitsugaya is believable (I mean, a mere *child* reaching the same status as him? I could see him angry about that.). Still, having two of my favourite characters killed off hurt. :(

Your writing is really wonderful and this piece drew me in most (Although the first three were fantastic as well.). The only objection I have is placing two rather depressing stories in a row, even though I love angst. Will you have lighter stories later?

Anyway, great work, and I'm eagerly looking forward to your next update. :)

This was a very god chapter!! byakuya is in character totally. I feel so bad though =[ but atleast there were some kissing xD write more soon!

I...I...I...
Good God that last prompt made ME wanna scream. Seriously.
But I can't scream seeing how it is currently 2 AM. XD
That was a great prompt. My fave is the first one though...
(Sorry. It just is. LoL) Keep up the great work.

Chapters 1-4
I love your writings! I love the story line of chap1, cried at chap2, hated chap3-4 -- (no way in my book Byakuya cuold love than baby ditcher Hisana over the purehearted Rukia!) if you were nearby I would have plonked your head with my Rukia flushy but then that's a stastement of how good a writer you are ;) Can we have a happy Byaruki and one where Byakuya gets a Rukia-amgst, he should get one considering how strong his rivals are (namely Renji and Ichigo)! Anyway keep up the good work.

I just re-read your previous chapters, and i have to say i like them better. Out of all of them, I like chapter one the best. It made me emotional. I hate to say it, but towards the end of this chapter, i was going -wtf...??!?!?!?!?!?!?! Not to mention, I really don't think nobles say screw-up...

Excuse my poor typing -I'm on a friend's laptop and his keyboard is tiny... Well, I look forward to your next chapter!

heyy! i guess you know me as SemperFidelis OTP...

umm well.. i'll have to say it was different... but i'll be frank here...

*BAWLS* WHY IS BYAKUYA EVIL?!?!?!?!?!! *BAWLS*

*sobsob* why did he kill Rukia and Toshiro? *sobsob*

Why did he kill chibi?

More importantly.. i CAN'T BELIEVE he killed Rukia...

*sniffles*

sigh... well... i wouldn't say it was your best work... but i'll say this... I NEVER expected something like this!

but oh well... hmm... It was Good in terms of the story plot part i guess...

hmm... have you gotten any suggestions for another 20_tears prompt so far?

if not... would you like to try "Salt on a open wound"?

i guess it would mean FIGURITIIVELY speaking... but then again... the irony comes in a literal form doesn't it?

or perhaps INSTEAD you'd like to try "A Great Happiness". I would sure LOVE to see this one. Ironic huh? it goes TWO ways i guess...

A Great Happiness turning into Sorrow...

A Great Happiness achieved at another person's expense

but oh well.. it's your call... i'm just a Patron... a REGULAR patron to your works... and a Fellow Hardcore (well.. not so... ) ByakuRuki fangirl...

I'm just a reader.. and a reviewer... so... comments i make are SIMPLY suggestions... though... you CAN take them into consideration if you'd like...

I'll be looking forward to the next prompt.

Write whenever you get the inspiration... but PLEASE let it be some time when you're free... don't wanna let it interfere with your life and all...


LUVVS 3> ^^
A.A

Awesome story, BUT NO Byakuya cant be evil..no! Oh well, it was a wonderful story. I luv the part wen Byakuya kissed Rukia,that was awesome. I look forward to ur next story. Update soon. =D

Wonderful! I loved it ^_^

*gasp* No no no! Byakuya can't be evil! There's no way that could happen...especially after he kissed her like that (loved that part, by the way XD)!

God, this definitely IS angst...that ending was WAY too sad...so Rukia does die, right? Aww geez...*cries*

Oh wellz, amazing chapter as usual. I look forward to the next one! :D

OMG this is absolutely amazing...I love your writing style. This reminds me of "writing prompts" that I do every day in English class...our teacher gives us a phrase and we can incorporate it into a story or poem.
The 3rd chapter/story was so sad! Byakuya walking out of the wedding at the last minute and all...*cries*
Anyway, this is simply amazing. I'm looking forward to more Byakuya/Rukia prompts from you! :D

Chapter 3= LOVE. If you don't go on I'll use you to make ramen!

I love your descriptivness, yor writing style is great! :) Please go on!

HAHAHAHA he DEFINITELY just ran out of his own wedding. He proposes, then soils himself. WHAT an ending. :D I don't even know why I'm so giddy. Anyway, this has been crazy go nuts. Tell me, are you continuing?

Hah. You almost made me cry. But you did not succeed.

D: That was so incredibly, almost unnecessarily, emolicious.