BWAHAHA! "he's so nice inside." "she's really frikken annoying." too perfect. ^_^

umm, I got my link from Satski, where it says Vincent eats babies. (mm, babies)

no need to write me a oneshot, use your writing time for your own choice of work. (Glomps lil Riku and runs away)

Ellos. I really liked the "prologue". :P Oober sad-ness. "Tears saved by hope" was very god. I loved it. And the third part was shorter, but it was still kinda good.


I got her via that link. V

Vincent! Don't eat that baby!
(If you go here, review one of their stories, and tell them that you got there via this link, I'll write you a one-shot.)

WooT. I love Konohamaru. And Konohamaru-with-McNaruto-ness-ness-ness.

Anyways, I really like this story. More. More. Ans this is the first Kingdom Hearts fic I've read. Heh.

-glomp- Nya!Sorry it took so long to review ^^; I'm so horrible!

Aw! Poor Riku! I feel so bad for him suring the first chapter T-T a mother shouldn't say things like that, especially after he just lost his father :S

Anyways! Awesome chapter XP I can't wait to read more!

This story is off to an interesting start.
I like the introductions of the characters so far.
The style and grammar are very good.

aw! poor little riku!

=O

ah i liked it.
esepcially the quote at the end and the last bit line.
;D can't wait to see what happens next.

- katraa

I like it. It's kinda strange opening the story with Kairi. But, I want to see how this fits all in...

It was really good also when you told about what had happened with her.
I also liked how you keep putting a saying at the bottom in bold. Thats awesome. haha. Great Story!

I really like how you're doing this! Kairi looks like she'll be a great character! :D I hope she and Riku will be friends. Mur. :3

Anyways, I think you did an excellent job introducing her. You really get her across quite nicely. ^_^

Riku is adorable when he's all withdrawn and insecure. >_< I get the feeling I'm going to love your future take on him.

Paine and Rikku were fun. And Leon is le awesomeness. Yup.

So yeah, all in all great job! Update soon, and don't be afraid of lengthy-ness. It is your friend. :P

*bliss*

I like the Kairi POV. And no bashing? Go You!

Nice chap, update soon!

This looks like it has promise, I can't wait till the next chapter.

Good start! *g* Really can't wait for it 'cause I do SO wanna read more. Poor, poor Riku, though! That'll take lots of time - and counseling/comforting! - to deal with. A thing I'm sure he won't get from his mother, hm...?

Oh.My.GOD!!That was so sad!!*cries*Poor Riku's dad!Poor Riku!!And damn Riku's mom for being a bitch!It wasn't his fault!The kid just wanted his ball and his dad,being the kind person he was,wanted to make his son happy.And the mom just had to go and fuck it up!...Ok...alright.Im cool.Ahem,anway.I like the story so far.Its very good!XD.But Riku's mom will die!You wait and see!Update soon!!

This was really very good. Little!Riku was adorable and so so sad... ;_; You conveyed their emotions really, really well. It was amazing really.

The one thing you might want to consider is making the chapters longer. You seem like a really good writer, don't be afraid to draw out scenes and go into great detail. :D

*bliss*

This is good! Poor Riku. He didn't mean to! Please update!