Lml oh wow

My God. It's been a quite a few months since I last read a Gakuen Alice fanfic, almost a year even. All I have to say is... WHY THE HECK DID I STOP?! God.. When I read it as a whole, it moved me to tears - bucket loads - I just could not stop! This is honestly the MOST endearing Gakuen Alice story I have ever read. It deserves an award my friend.

WE? Hahaha. Oh, Natsume. Ever his love has never been too showy. I definitely love this story, simple but full of humor, with a taste of romance, 3-in-1. XD

Natsume arguing with Mikan was absolutely funny as well as giggly, as if they're actually a couple. SWEET. 3

-N.H.-

so nice... so sweet

Didn't exept that :)

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA

That is so clever! This is a wonderful piece again. I'm starting to think that you are capable of making all characters lovable, because I liked Mikan in this one, too! I liked her here way better than when I liked her in the manga a long time ago. Narumi is not irritating here compared to what other fan fiction writers make of him. He's just as lovable as ever. Natsume is in character. Everything that he said and did is very much like him. You have characterized him well.

Very well-written, this one is. It's as enjoyable to read as your other works. Maybe I enjoyed this more because it is connected with the other pieces. I really loved this. Thumbs up!

xoxo,
Marse Speaks

Awesome! D

Because everytime i read it i just can't get enough of the sweetness as well as craziness of the idea this story has.
How well you build the concept and just filled it with the beautiful thoughts..
Natsume's 1 line just made the essence of whole story..

Thanks
D!

Your works never seem to fail to work my emotions. It is also the same reason I've always wondered if you're a psychologist or some other things related to it.

A work of art, indeed. Those simple things you turn into beautiful gems is remarkable.

This is wonderful ! I really like your writing style.

it's just so so soooooooooooooooooooooooooo awwwwwwwwwwww! **
yeah, now awww is a adjective ewe

The ending was so precious. Oh, Mr. Narumi 3

This is too good to be true. I love it! :D Fave story!

Just leave it to Narumi to pass Natsume with that sentence. Damn Natsume is so sweet in his own twisted way. Fluff Puffs for Mikan everyday would be a piece of cake!

This is seriously like an omake of the manga!

natsume will marry with mikan kawaiiiii