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| Riana1 2008-01-14 ch 8,  | abuseAnd we get the canon timeline but improved. No need to steal Joshua away and break Chrno and Rosette's hearts, but fulfill their deepest wishes to see and help the world. And Rosette and Aion being snarky at each other will be amusing. |
| Chrono The Sinner123 2007-11-26 ch 7, | abuseyou meen thats it?? like ur stopping?? ah man. its so good tho! I loved it all and mabey i was really excited to hear your next chapter but then u said thats it so i cried. :( PLZ PLZ PLZ extend |
| Riana1 2007-11-20 ch 7, | abuseAt least they got some smut-- here's hoping Mary can pull through. I really love this. |
| -Lily Maple- 2007-10-26 ch 6, anon. | abuseUpdate faster?? I love the story and I am dieing with suspense! |
| Riana1 2007-10-08 ch 6, | abuseI adore how you are fleshing our Mary from her pretty doomed martyr bit into a graceful, chillingly insightful woman. She and Aion can see the fault lines in other souls-- the fallout of having theirs blasted wiped open. And the description of Mary before her visions and its aftermath had me in chills. |
| antalope 2007-10-07 ch 6, anon. | abuseThank you so very much! I've been waiting for the next chapter of this story for absolutly forever! ...That was the wrong grammer wasn't it? Anyway, I like how you found similarities between Mary and Aion and used them in the story. Thanks alot! |
| Eek 2007-09-10 ch 3, anon. | abuse"Shader dubbed the effect "visible spectrum bleedoff" and readjusted the sensors to accommodate the power spikes that sometimes shorted out her equipment. Aion called it one more thing to worry about, and Genai started calling her "Lightning Bug." Hee, that was funny. I like the way thatyou protray everyone in the story, Keep it up! |
| Um... 2007-08-18 ch 5, anon. | abusePlease continue! The anticipation is killing me! |
| Riana1 2007-08-04 ch 5, | abuseThis commands both plot and sweet sexual tension. Mary reminds me of Aerith of FF7 fame: sweetness supreme with a wicked sense of humor. |
| Chrono The Sinner123 2007-08-03 ch 4, | abuseI love your story!! |
| Riana1 2007-07-23 ch 4, | abuseThis plans to be good. |
| Hydraa 2007-07-22 ch 4, | abuseOo, I like. I wasn't expecting them to try that, or for that to be the result. I like the relationship between Aion and Chrno, with Chrno trying to protect his brother. I also like how Aion treats his people. It works for me. I just wish the chapter were longer. I want to find out what happens next. |
| Riana1 2007-07-02 ch 3, | abuseI love how Mary deals with Ewan. I have always had a soft spot for him since the anime made him so pretty but did nothing for his character. |
| Satans-Dreamer19 2007-07-01 ch 3, | abusecool! ((me likey your story)) |
| satans_dreamer19 2007-06-29 ch 2, anon. | abusesnap! thats a good story. ((Me likee Aion:P )) |