yay!
That's all i could say for now.
nice story, btw.
keep it up.
~gaia09

Good story so far. Update soon.

you still didn't answer my question. is hitomi a bender or not? well you don't acctually have to answer to me, but i hope it will become clear in the next chappie XD (which i hope will appear very soon.)

You are so good at keeping me waiting... Anyway good chapter! Update soon!

~Monko25

this story is gonna be awesome i can tell, so is toph's cousin a bender also? can't wait till he next chapter

OH! CLIFFI! This is great!! I'm starting to like it!! Keep it up!! Good work! Keep writing!!
~gaia09

O continue soon :) Awesome!

Where did the Gaang go? Is the place familiar to Toph? Please explain. Anyways this is good, update soon please

Interesting chapter. Did you mean to put a break between Katara's last line and Hitomi's beginning line? That threw me off slightly but not much once I reread it. Again, it's getting interesting. ^_^ Keep it up!

Nice! This is interesting. Can't wait for Chapter 2. ^_^

This is interesting! Nice plot and keep going!! I'm liking this!!