Finally finished! I'm glad Doyle and Nadia are happy together. It is interesting that Doyle is processing his son, Oliver's, application. Doyle knows how dangerous and horrible life at CTU is but he's willing to let his son make his own decisions.

I am going to see what the whole Gemma story is. I guess getting betrayed by a lover is an occupational hazard at CTU. It seems to happen a lot! You seemed to capture Chloe very well in just a couple of sentences. Blunt, rude, awkward and still caring. Hope you enjoyed Italy. I was there for a few weeks five years ago and wished I had longer.

It was so sweet that the first thing Doyle saw was Nadia's face. I'm going the guess that the tribute was St. Anthony/Tony. I imagine the rest of the story will develope their relationship further. Sorry I haven't reviewed for a while. I'm just now catching up.

-author alert- i loved it, and i wanna figure out what happened and all the stuff to england and whatever, it was really sweet and awesome. keep up the great work!

Aaw this is so sweet. I like the way everyone's linked in at the end. Bless. I love a happy ending :0) "The next generation" idea leads to multiple possibilities too... Please write a story set in England, that would be really cool! Thanks for writing!

lovely ending to a really delightful story! i can't believe doyle falls asleep on his wedding day - how typical of men :). i like how you left it open for another story. yes pls do a sequel, i would love to read about their adventures in england.

Oh yes, please do a sequel! Definitely opens some doors with their kids and all... hmm... that would be interesting. That was a lovely ending to a WONDERFUL story!

Worse manners than Chloe... *sniggers* Nice.

Aww! *tear* So beautiful. Can't wait for the final chapter...

love it! really nice and sweet chapter, but i'm sad that the next one's the last. i usually ask you to update soon, but this time maybe write slowly :)

I really liked the part where he says he has worse manners than Chloe! How very true! Nice interaction between them at the end. Very sweet.

good drama! but please don't let him end up in jail...sad that only 2 more chapters left :(

Oh dear... he always has to go and foul things up, doesn't he? Very interesting.

Very cute at the end.

Update soon! I want to find out about the other 2 characters. :)

i really liked this chap. love doyle coping with the challenge. good ending to the chap. let's hope that he gets back to doing what he loves. by the way, i say movie and college. not sure what that's for...looking forward to the next chap, update soon, ok?

1. usually movie

2. college, unless it's in the name (like University of Texas)

Excellent chapter! I think this is my favorite so far. Short, but definitely sweet and... well, it's hard to say. I love that he hits the center for the first time after she talks to him. :-) Update soon!