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Reviews for: Blood In The Pool
Rose1948
2007-05-24 . chapter 1
A very nice story. I enjoyed it very much.
mikebreslau
2005-08-13 . chapter 1
Another nice on from gregg.

Says so much with so few words...
Alex Ultra
2004-07-02 . chapter 1
Heh, 'Meow?' I like this, and since it seems to have a sufficient ending, I won't prod. It's a good little Fluff story that's got a 'somewhat' happy ending. Keep it up!

LATER
dogbertcarroll
2003-04-09 . chapter 1
A decent fic. I know its just a one shot but it would make a good basis for a series.
John Dunkelburg
2001-07-21 . chapter 1
I like it.
ariel stormcloud
2001-07-20 . chapter 1
good story. thanks.
Stephen
2001-07-19 . chapter 1
Back at it again, I see. Excellent story as always. Hope to see more from you.
some guy
2001-07-19 . chapter 1
good story
Essex
2001-07-19 . chapter 1
Very nice story. I take it from the ending that Ranma's mind has incorporated some elements of Shampoo's mind and Lilac's mind? It would be quite interesting to see how Genma reacts to his much changed son. He would likely frown on any interests (as in medicine) outside of the martial arts and he'd likely go ballistic at Ranma's marriage to Shampoo, but this new Ranma may be much harder to goad, prod or trick.
NemesisZero
2001-07-19 . chapter 1
i just don't know about ranma going along with this so easily. sure, he really is a slave to his 'honor', but he also runs from just about every problem not involving his fists that comes up. add in that the amazons will expect 'mr wild horse' to submit to every 'weak little girl' in town, and i just don't see it working out. ovrall an oddly pleasant story, even with the darker bits.
yinyan8
2001-07-18 . chapter 1
This ended up being a pleasant happy fic. Never mind, Ranma's mind was magically ravaged, and Mousse tried to kill him, and Lilac basically is gone. Here I was reading, waiting for the other shoe to drop, for something extremely bad to happen (like Ranma's cat side goes beserk) but somehow it's happy. I don't know why I'm in a cheerful mood after reading this. Anyway, the idea that Jusenkyo is sentient and would be offended that blood got spilled in its pool is pretty original. You could work more with the consequences of this in some fic.
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