   Rocket 5/11/04 . chapter 1A very charming little story. Nice job. |
| Tsuki 12/15/02 . chapter 1 Very nicely done. Short and sweet. |
| Kiele Highwind that lazy grrrl who just won't sign in 9/8/01 . chapter 1 Short, but brimming with cleverness and ripe with vivid description. Sometimes the shorter pieces are amongst the greatest. Excellent job! Now for my seal of approval...*lugs out enormous rubber stamper-thingy*...*pause to build up suspense*...*EL STAMPO!* |
| Lunaludus Scribex 9/8/01 . chapter 1 Nicely done. |
| Viviane Latour 8/30/01 . chapter 1 Wow, very poetic. I never would have thought to write about summoning, but you've put a strong significance to an otherwise mundane event, especially by using Maduin. Excellent job! |
| pureVENOM 7/21/01 . chapter 1 Yeah, it IS short and sweet. It was really detailed for such a short fic. Nice. |
| Lord Daravon Too Lazy To Sign In 7/20/01 . chapter 1 Good story. Can't say much more that that, just good. "Keep it up, kid!" |
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