nice! are you going to write more or is this it?

Great story. I hate Paulina, but like her in this fic.

i gotta say, i'm impress, i more of a dannyXjune or dannyXember fan, but you made kinda like danny paulina, you did an outstanding job of making less like a snob and more of a likeable person

Do you actually like Danny and Paulina being together?

You did an excellent job with Paulina.

Nice story! It's like Paulina had seen another side of Danny Fenton/Phantom...

This fic is so cute. It makes me want to go write a fic with Paulina in it. She doesn't get enough love. :D

Not bad; Paulina even realized how likable Danny really is.

Keep the good writing.

Very interesting plot. Not the first time Paulina has gone out with Danny due to ulterior motives, but the first time she's been pulled off in this way. I liked it. I do think she is at least somewhat deeper than the show lets on; kind of like Legally Blonde, would be the best way to describe it. Not the brightest bulb in the box, but not altogether terrible either.

Hm, very interesting. A fic including Paulina where in Paulina isn't a "shallow little witch". She actually seemed like a real person, if not a bit self centered, while still maintaining that attitude that makes her in character. Good job!