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Neeshack
2009-11-29 . chapter 6
Great Sequel. Fantastic. Totally loved it.
TwilightersandMusic
2009-10-26 . chapter 6
AWESOME!
123-321
2009-10-05 . chapter 6
very, very nice
Torchwoodfan13
2009-08-24 . chapter 6
i love love loved this story the first and the second...excellent writing...i wish it didnt end
Rori Potter
2009-08-24 . chapter 6
That was amazing.
beauty0102
2009-08-19 . chapter 6
this is bauty7890102 I moved to this account because I check almost every day.

This was a great squeal.
SeparatriX
2009-08-14 . chapter 5
Oh, two discrepancies in this otherwise wonderful story. In the first story, when Harry was back in the past, Bill Weasley was a student. So when Potter and Sirius are teasing Severus about Alex going back to his own time, Molly comforts him, it is not clear if she is a student, or if she is simply an Order member. At that point in time though, I don't think that Severus, James or Sirius were Order members yet. The other discrepancy is that Harry went back to 1977, not 1983.
SeparatriX
2009-08-14 . chapter 4
Just one teensy problem I see here: If Harry is Godric's heir and Severus is Salazar's heir, and Salazar and Godric were both the parents of their heirs, that would actually make Harry and Severus related. I don't know how diluted the blood would be by now, but if they are the real heirs, then I would imagine that the relationship is still rather close.
mrscakeakajane
2009-07-07 . chapter 6
simply wonderfull story, ive read the other one too and loved it. please i beg you write some more
O Desperado Sweetie O
2009-06-25 . chapter 6
This was a good story, however, just like Impressions, it ended too soon.

I'm glad that the kids approved of them and became attached to them. Also, that Millie and her sister were reunited.

Great story as always.
O Desperado Sweetie O
2009-06-20 . chapter 5
Hey there,

I never sent a review on the prequel to this story, but there is a change that needs to be made in both stories. In this one where Harry and Severus are getting ready to take the 4 death eater children to Diagon Alley for their supplies you have that Harry recognises the Slytherin drawl from his time in 1983. Harry was 3 years old in 1983 it should be 1977 not 83. As that was the time Harry went back to. I just thought I would point that out.

Other than that, I am enjoying this story.
xEferiellax
2009-06-14 . chapter 6
I loved this and the prequel ^^
Crazzy-girl #1, very crazzy!
2009-03-18 . chapter 2
Dumboldoors reaction was too funy. Havn't laughed that loud sice i was 120. thx.
sexy fox 101
2009-03-01 . chapter 6
alw so CUTE! anyway is there going to be other story or is it ending hear?i hope ther will be more i love your stories! i cant waint for thenm to have a familyy aalw soo cute! ^-^ anyway see yah latter jenn
Storm.Gazer
2009-02-08 . chapter 6
Is there going to be another sequel?
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