Interesting take on what the 2 brothers could have been thinking about after Jack's death. Like the idea of Jack being the glue or light of the 4 brothers. (Sorry, I know you wrote it over a year ago, but just want to let you know how awsome your story is.)

sad, i miss jackie! It was sweet that they loved him so much!

Very Mercer-ish. I like it. Catch ya on the flip side.

I never really blamed anyone but Jack for dying. If he hadn't followed that guy out into the street he would still be alive. If he had just waited five more seconds Bobby, Angel, and Jerry would have had his back. His quick temper got the best of him. But I agree with what you're saying. They both feel like they could have done something if they had only acted sooner. Great job.

As depressing as this was, It was written wonderfully!! And this situation almost seems more realistic compared to the one in the movie! Don't get me wrong, the one in the movie was great to, but this just seems like something alot more likely to happen in that type of situation! Well, thanks for writting it!