the end was so sad! they die that very day! I can't believe it! I feel so bad...

wow. that's...wow. really deep, really enchanting. i love james's sentiments. they are really beautiful. it's not quite as upbeat as i was hoping for in a next story, but i do think that it was a really great story. kind of a transition, you know? i really love it.



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Beautiful. I like how the story was told in second person. It helps the reader understand what exactly what happened between L/J. The ending is sad, knowing that they wouldn't live to see November 1st.

'You still have all the time in the world.' Favourite line in the whole oneshot.

Purely wonderful!

XOXO Mrs. James Harold Potter

I really like the way you're evolving the story around time and forever. It's different, original, your own twist to a story told many times. I like it. The end; kinda depressing, but still this is more happy than sad in a way. I mean, at least he was happy and content when he died... Anyway, good job!

That was beautiful... really touching at the end because you know he's about to die, despite his thoughts. Wonderful job.

This fic had me in tears! Admittedly it starts off a little slow, but by the end I was throughly engrossed.

I really liked the constance theme of time. And the last line was especially poignant.

Very good job with this. Very affecting and enjoyable read. :D

Wow. Just...oh, my gosh.

You completely had me sucked in for the time that it took for me to read this. It was just amazing.

I love the ending especially. It made me horribly sad, and the irony of it is just breathtaking. Amazing, amazing, AMAZING job on this.

~jaye~

that's so sad, yet humorous, in a melonchally sort of way. even after all that time, James is still oblivious...

you are the best author of one shots...you always find the most perfect way to sum everything up. this one, is definitely one of my faves though...very well done :D

oh sad! but also amazing. really glad you ended when you did and didn't cover lily and james' deaths. it was a good decision and nice for the readers because we get to imagine them all grown up and alive for once. i honestly think thats the first time i've seen someone cover that day and not the murders. well done. Cheers!

Oh, this def pulled the heartstrings for me...I just love James so much and I love the way you portray him.

Well done on this fic!

aww, this was so good, but it made me sad at the end, his thinking there was all the time in the world, and he would soon die. but it was awesome :)

Very nice! I liked your use of second person; it fit well with the story and writers don't use it very often, so its nice change. Your ending's quite sad, but it fits well with how I picture James and Lily's death- the two confident in their trust of Peter, completely unaware that Peter was working for Voldemort. The last line, especially, was a perfect ending, albeit a bittersweet one.

omm! (oh my merlin!) such an amzing work of literature! i loved it! there was a really nice flow going on here, and i thought you expressed your ideas really well! job well done all around!

Aw so bittersweet but I love it. =]