I like it, you should definitely continue, I love the whole competition thing between Bella and Edward hahaha, it made me laugh. Great start, Sky. :]]

And also the whole thing with him being 'a freaking god in this school' and the 'Barbie fan girls' made me laugh so hard.

CONTINUE, please. :]]

LOVE IT.

-jane.

HA I love it! i cant wait for more, you have a gift, its true! i love all your stories!

lol, sounds really interesting. update soon.