This was a hilarious story!especially the part where Tania"rearranged my organs in alphabetical order,"
That's so classic!Anyway great story!

0.0 Crowlers a guy! Wow ya learn somin new every day!

um actually, he didn't get a white uniform because of his waist size and his height, it's because he's a third year obelisk and u made this story so that it's his first year here. you need more work. it's as if you wrote this whole thing in 2 seconds. fix it!

Tezzino from Alanna-Twins: great story, i wanna read mroe!

win.

~Kaisre

okay, now Zane's middle name was from "Those Crazy Obelisks", right? and the miniskirts thing was from Fullmetal Alchemist? btw, love the thing with the whole "i really feel like i should hate him for some reason". PRICELESS! YOU, MY FRIEND, EVEN IF I WASNT IN YOUR DEBT FOR ALL ETERNITY FOR TELLING ME ZANE WAS ALIVE, ARE A FANFIC GENIUS!

now, "invisible guns" i KNOW was from LittleKuriboh. i LOVE that series! hehe, levitating trenchcoat.

batman. nice. BAZOOKAS! WOO!

is the "creepy cat guy" thing a spinoff of Mako Tsunami the freaky fish guy? still hilarious! i love House! i think Zane has some SERIOUS issues...of course, i should know...i've known the guy for over two years.

oh, poor atty...oh the humanity...or whatever the hell crowler is...

i dont know WHY the computer wont let me submit a signed review, but it won't. this is wonderfulness, anyway!

Heehee, funny - i reminds me of anoher fic, 'Chazz Princeton: Ramblings of a suicidal emo-goth'. Did you get your inspiration from there, perhaps? I noticed the littlekuriboh references in there as well,but be sure to give him credit - he REALLY hates people stealing his lines, as one would.
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This is such a cool thang, you know?
I never really liked Atticus/Fubuki but well things are different now.
Great job :D sexy!

5/5

Lolzers. I laughed really hard when reading this XD You rock!

hm... Bleach! very funny! 137 never happened!

Well done! your story is hilarious! I love the parts with Hell Kaiser Ryo and Zane's will to Syrus. Oh, and the "whoops i'm thinking out loud again" parts. Good job!