That was really sweet. I love the way that you depict their relationship, and you write very well. I loved the overall feel to this story/one-shot. Good work.

HOW SWEET...Its always a pleasure to read your stories.

[“Is it…about us?” There was a slight hesitation in Kai’s tone,...“Did I do something? Say something?”

“What? No!” Tyson’s head whirled around ].I just love it when there is slight insecurity in kai and how tyson always denys it...its ...I don't know ...but gives me jitters as how much two people can love each other to fEEl all THOSE EMOTIONS for each CREDIT TO YOU GIRL!

WELL ITS SO TRUE IF one OBSERVES EACH SEASON IN BEYBLADE TELLS YOU SOMETHING ABOUT Tyson's relationshio with love is something which gradually takes over your heart,this time makes it grow deep.

aw that's so sweet! and I guess it's also totally true for the two of them... love has kinda grown on them D

*squeels!* Short cute sweet and fantastic! That's all i can say really. Poor Tyson though, worrying so mch...and wth as up with Kenny!*grabs teen and drags him to an itorregation room*

Anyways its so sweet! I loved all them moments you described briefly in the anime aswell mwuahaha! XD yay another for my favs!

OMG! This is my 2nd TyKai story...and I loved it! It was so awsome! So sweet and cute! Just amazing! You did awsome!

Loves. Later!

-No No 22

Aw... _ I love fluffiness ! Great job on this, keep it up ! Yay for TyKa ! ;;

Take care !

Yeshh! Now I'm a happy fangirl. Tyka is not dead yet! Thank you, Kali, this was very cute!

hmm... I don't know why I do have an impression that Kai is one of those people who believe in fate and destiny or has come to believe in it with time. Kai speaks rarely when he does he can get quite poetic.

"Our duel has been written in the stars!" Kai, episode 47.

Why am I rambling? Good work Kali, as always. I loved it.

Man, I shouldn't be reviewing (let alone reading fic) because I'm meant to be doing stuff. However, I couldn't resist doing either! A beautiful little story, very sweet. I loved your Kai, and comments about Tyson's beyblading-with-emotion as the way to get his thoughts out of him. I really was struck by how well-characterised they both were, and you maintained the mood throughout so there was no discrepencies or sudden dialogue/actions that didn't fit the scenario. Everything built up slowly but surely to the bright climax of the story, echoing the nature of the TyKa relationship. Lovely.

Err...hope you know what I mean XD My comment's a bit off D: Sorry. But it was a great story, and I loved it.

Look forward to reading more from you.

(( D: And my teeth hurt too! Nu D: I don't wanna go to the Dentist! It's like the Doctor, you always hate going when you think they're going to find something wrong with you.)

Anyway, much love for you and your story,

Cajun Cat

Gorgeous _

Kai and Tyson have such a deep and complex relationship, it can't be put into words, or even one moment! :D

This captured Tyka so well I feel all gooey inside

Never stop writing - love your work too much.

O_O! For a second I thought Glay had somehow updated her fic, BUT YOU WROTE A NEW ONE! That was extra syrupy and sweet *_*! You know how I love WAFF! I like how you had Kai beyblade Tyson as his way to get him to open up. Their special place in ep 30, both Tyson and Kai call it their 'dream world' in the Japanese version! The recreation of that at the end of the fic totally cinced it _!

Aw...that's really sweet. Nothin' like a good bit of fluff. _ I liked that a lot.