I liked it. I see where you're coming from with the second couple. So sad, what happens in the movie (and no, I haven't read the comic books).

All three couples showed love and how it can overcome hate, if only for a moment, all can be right in the world. I especially liked the neighborhood teens coming over to help the gramma. The boys offering her 50 cents was also very sweet and touching. The format made reading it confusing, but the fact that the song was in italics helped to differentiate between the two.

If you were trying to indent (and I don't know if you were), I've found that putting dashes before the lines you want to indent helps. They don't get in the way of reading, but they add something to make the different lines different.

I'm sorry, this is my second review but I swear, everytime I read this story I get all teary eyed.

Was the first couple me and Greg? If it was, thank you! That brought happy tears to my eyes, the whole thing is so sweet! God, I'm crying now, happy tears though! If it wasn't me and Greg, I'm still crying cuz that was just the sweetest thing ever!