Very good :D But sad :(

I wonder...could you do a Peter drabble? You don't see many of those, and I'm fair sure that you could do it wonderfully. Kudos on yet another marvelous one-shot!

Oh my goodness, that was so sad, but really good.

wow. this is like a depressing streak. i mean, i like the stories, but it is still majorly depressing. i like them though.

but let us be HAPPY again!


*reading on*
bub'les

So sad... it brought tears to my eyes. I loved it, definetely a favourite.

This was fascinating, you have written in second person with so much style, it felt as if I were Sirius and made the whole reading process so much more real and emotional to me. I love that he can't get the past out of his head and the pain and guilt he feels for his friends that are gone, especially James.

This was a pure wonder to read, I enjoyed every word, congratualtions.

- Frayed

aww poor Sirius. He's so depressed in Order of the Pheonix.


Arya

This is a really good Sirius-centric story. Well-written.

Sad... but beautiful. Poor Sirius :(
- Gaby

Oh my, this was fantastically sad.

The repitition really tied it all together, and the fact that it is in second person just adds to its genius.

Congratulations on such a deep oneshot, and thank you for writing this.

Jeez. I was fighting tears the whole time I was reading this. I've been looking for a one-shot like this for a while now, and you completely nailed it. This is brilliant.

You're a great writer. :D Again...amazing job. Meep.

~jaye~

Poor Sirius, his life didn't work out the way it should have. Although, he's probably happier with James and Lily now than he was on Earth. =]

wow. that was incredible! it was so well written and you captured the emotions Sirius would have been feeling fantastically. i actually got goosebumps while i was reading it, i really really loved it!
definately going in my favourites, just- wow! i don't really know how to describe how i feel about this fic, it's just brilliant!
Well bye! i'm going to read it again now!
xXRachelXx

that's so sad. i want to cry for siius. i read so many fics about the young, carefree, dashing,, playboy sirius hat i forget the older, heartbroken one. amazing work.
Heartbroken In The Downpour,
Rosemary Emerson

Aww ... brilliant!

I read your LJ one too, that's just as brilliant, and I was wondering if you'd do one for Remus