I must agree with previous comments, that this was a new take on possession and it was an interesting read, but I can't help feel that this creature still could've been portrayed slightly more nuanced :)

I just found your story and I read it all at once; I thought it was very well written. Possession had been done before, but I really liked the way you developed the story. And I thought it was very good you added the entity's POV, because it is less difficult to keep up like that. The entity sure used a lot of bodies, but you made it possible to track it, without taking the tension out. Very nicely done!

Sorry I didn't review every chapter it's so hard to especially when you know the next chappie is just waiting for you. I really enjoyed the story and loved the Shep whump. Looking foward to the next one. Take care!

Great start. I'm excited to see where you are going with this.

Great job! A really good story and well-written! I enjoyed every word!
Thanks!

poor john...sleep...oh so they can help save teyla now!??!?! what an evil creature!! loved these two chapters!!

Great fun!

The pyscho entity back in the box.
Teyla alive and well and un-deteriorated
Sheppard getting released soon..

The bet was a nice touch.

Lots of fun to read.

Poor sheppard, no one likes to be treated as a little kid or placated.

He's correct though, they don't have much in control.

they must save Teyla.

This is great fun to read

LOLOL the end was cute! Great story! Write some more! Some Carson whump next, perhaps? :)

pyschopath energy being..not so good.

great chapter.

Wow, the thing said no! I didn't expect that, LOL! Is it gonna eventually agree? LOL

oh carson is very brave!! but no dont do it!! teyla will fight!! loving this story!! update soon!

carson, what a guy.

go save Teyla!

Whoa! Carson Beckett, everyone's hero! :) :) :) :) :) Wow! I can't wait for chapter 12! PLEASE post it soon!

Oh that is so Carson! What a decision.