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Fernsfairie
2009-03-30 . chapter 1
Disturbing. Very. Disturbing. I SLEEP RIGHT BY OUR LIBRARY!
lacrevette35
2009-03-10 . chapter 1
I love it! I don't know why I didn't saw this prequel to "what if" before!!
Could i translate this in french too? The other had only very good reviews! Please!
Kiss

lacrevette35
KonekoKitz
2009-01-11 . chapter 1
Ok... the library was my one sanctuary to NOT think about smut and different... situations... with different... err people... and now my innocence is spoiled. Not really, never been innocent since I formed coherent thought, but still. Library is now off limits... hm, maybe like a cupboard?? Yeah, when I want to get away from my smutty thoughts/conversations I'll go sit in a cupboard... it'll work...maybe. Much thanks! Great story! I loved it.

Gryfferin Princess
2008-12-21 . chapter 1
OMG! Hahahahahaha! Hilarious, LMAO!
4everthesickestbabe16
2008-12-10 . chapter 1
LMAO..."What if I were to tell you that I'm so turned on right now that I'm about to rape you right here, on this table?" that was so funny
i love this story it was so cute and funny.
ihatexaiby
2008-10-27 . chapter 1
hahahaha.. funny start.
really good. im excited with the next.
gitgit
2008-10-03 . chapter 1
ahahahahahahahhah
that was awesome
nice chapter
princessinct
2008-09-17 . chapter 1
Cute story.
Nice to see Draco & Hermione's 1st "what if" library scene.
Though I thought using the word "rape" was too harsh/violent/unnecessarily crude.
Perhaps another word (to convey mutual intentions) would've been better.
Even the F word would've been preferred.
Ah well, your story. Your words.
All in all, I liked.
Thanks.
LK-HoGwArTs-hEaDgIrL
2008-06-22 . chapter 1
really good
Eternity-xxx
2008-03-17 . chapter 1
Lol, this was a great one too!

Hee hee splintered ** anyone?!
bek
2008-03-14 . chapter 1
i love it!

and that last line!! lol
mitch365
2008-03-06 . chapter 1
loved it it is so funny
Linda Felton
2008-03-06 . chapter 1
Haha that was so funny! xD
keep up the good work!
Sirie
2007-11-27 . chapter 1
ahahaha! Great one!
Max Ride Fan 13
2007-10-31 . chapter 1
"What if I said I could care less what you have to say?" it should be couldn't care less right?
"What if I told you that every night I dream about holding like this?" holding you like this.
OMG! THIS IS HILARIOUS! Did they really do it on every table in the library? Lol. Great fic!
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