sweet story

WoW. That was terrific. Long, detailed chapters. Great character analysis. You captured them perfectly. They should definately make this an episode or two.

I love it

NO! they got so far!

man, for real?!

no memory!

come on!

lol. ok, now that that's outta my system.

Loved It.

b4 i continute, just found your story and LOVE it! great idea! love the banter and dynamics. i kno it was sad, but you also kept the humor when he was like he'd wait for the night if something happened to her and she kept interrupting him. okay...reading on now!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

great story but how come u couldn't have her luv him? i wanna do a fic but i need help. can u help me?

Really great first chapter, maybe I'll continue

Wow story is awsome I love it and I can actually see it happening in the series. Serously well done

i just think this is totally cool

I am so glad that you posted the ending to this story. I do have one question for you. Why was Vicki so sure she wasn't going to die? She was stabbed in the heart, wasn't she? Was wondering if I missed something. I enjoyed the story very much. Was sad that he took her memories of their time together.

Hello! SCANDELOUSLYME...I hope that's right. Grl, I LOVE THIS STORY AND CHAPTER 6 IS MY ABSOLUTE FAVORITE. I mean, you are really good at this stuff and I believe that if our show is renewed for more seasons, that the writers will do something like this for a future episode. I just wanted to let you know that I loved it and I'm still reading it and I can't wait to see what is next for these characters. Keep 'em coming grlfriend..."PEACE OUT!..." PERRI.

Fantastic ending...I love the way that Mike always comes in saving everyone at the end...or at least saving Vicki. I also like how you protray Coreen. It was hilarious and morbid at teh same time. Although I'm still a little confused about how Nathan could've sucked out Henry's mental capabilities...but that's not as important as the love story. I thought it was a little unnescessary to make Vicki forget all the "fun in the sun" and everything else...oh well...good job!! --claps--

I just started this and I figured as a fellow writer it's common curtesy to write a review after a couple of chapters. This is a fantastic story...and I applaud you. It's hard to write Henry/Vicki/Mike. Hell it hards to write Henry/Vick and still keep their characters from getting too sappy...wonderful job and I hope there are more twists and turns ahead.

I way beyond loved your story. I really wish that you had let Vicki and Henry stay together in the end though...Are you going to write anymore Blood Ties fics? I really hope you do, though perhaps one in which Vicki and Henry actually end up together... I've heard that some authors take requests for stories... If you are one of those authors, I'd be very greatful if you would write a story in which Vicky finally admits to Henry that she loves him, and Mike doesn't try to get in the way...I'm adding this to my favorite stories list, and you to my author alert list. You are an incredible writer.