I've finally reached the latest chapter...

Oh, Linay...Linaaaaaaaay. T_ T

You're writing is too good to ignore. Now I suffer from another incomplete story. *sigh*

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whhhhhhhhy?

So beautiful, so sad. Uhhg, Linay, you kill me.

Oh. my. gosh! Nande? Why! WHY are the BEST stories always NEVER finished! It really frustrates the hell out of me. T_T. I am chewing my hair in frustration here! Literally! T_T Normally, I don't get frustrated like this over a story. But this is no ordinary story. It's a masterpiece! Really, writers like you and stories like this are rare to find! It's too great to be unfinished!

Linay-san, please read this, I hope you can continue this great great story! I love it so much! I love everything about it, the plot, the OCs, your incredible writing style! I love it and I care about it so much!

Please do not give up on this one! It doesnt matter how long it will take, I understand we have our own lives, but I really hope you don't give this up and take the time one day to finish it. It'll be a shame that this awesome story will be put into a waste. Seriously.

Always thankful and waiting,

your fan, Nukidono 3

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Gomenasai! I messed up with my review! I'm so sorry! the review before this was mine too but it's supposed to be for a dbz story, but too late, cant delete it anymore...gomen again..pls feel free to remove it if you could..

Great chapter! or chapters. lol. Hehe, I really don't know much about marriage laws and stuff but looks like things won't be as easy as I thought it will be for our fave couple, ne? Our poor Chichi's getting more frustrated every minute, I'm just glad that Goku's there for her. I wonder what he's planning? oh and Goten is too adorable! I just wanna hug him so tight! With or without dino poop! Visor the advisor/lawyer? lol. That's funny. I wonder if there's more puns to come..hmm? XD

Love the chapter! Keep it coming!

I know you haven't updated this story for a long time and have abandoned it for now. But I beg you to please continue! This is so well written, I almost thought I was watching the anime or reading the manga. I've thoroughly enjoyed it so far, and I REALLY, REALLY want to know what happens! Ok, I'm sorry for the begging. I bet I'm just making you feel bad. But really, AWESOME JOB!

Ah, spoken like a true brother and a true... Kenshin? (What is he to Kaoru at this point, anyways?)

Forgive me for being blunt, but a good once-over on the chapters would help in making a few corrections. It's not much, usually just capitalization and punctuation.

update?,

brittney

10 years later and i just discovered this story! Ive been a LONG time fan of broken pieces and i have no idea how i nevered read this before! Linay, you have TALENT! this was amazing i loved it! read the entire thing in one sitting ]. Too bad you didnt get to finish but it was still a great read. Now im gona have to go and read all your work! find that inspiration and START WRITING AGIAN!

Aww man! I can't believe I got to the end! I love this story sooo much! Please update! (even though you haven't in almost a decade.) T.T

You weren't getting enough encouraging reviews, were you ? I wish I couldn've found this back then but I didn't even know about RK until just recently. Sad, I know.

Well I just want you to know that I love this story to bits and if you are still writing, then please update! I'm gonna go read the rest of your stories now. Ja ne!

Well well..totally didn't see that coming. Minako being the culprit all along! *gasp* It was hard to wrap around the fact that she was the one doing all the dirty work because I've always pictured her to be super old and I dunno why. maybe there was a lack of description on what she looked like? hehe perhaps I need to read back the chapter when she first met the gang.

Anywho, what's up with Koji? Hmm, being an overprotective brother or is he plotting something evil?

I just have to voice this out but I don't like Kaoru's demeanor on this fanfic. She's being an immature brat and Kenshin...I don't think he would make love to her that quickly would he? and then leave her like that? I just don't see Kensan doing that..

and where in the world is Sano and Megumi?

Uwaa..otherwise this fanfic is still awesome. Looking forward to an update!

dun dun dun...

this story is very canon to me :) I can totally picture it..as if it's an episode of rurouni kenshin. I hope you get the chance to finish it. I'm patiently waiting. Such great writing is worth waiting for

Any chance you'll ever become re-inspired to go back to this story?

Beautiful writing!

OH JESUS I DIDNT EXPECT THAT! O TT What a way to stop..What a cliffie.. I enjoyed this truly! Please update soon when you can! )

Ari chan

Maybe I was wrong about Koji T_T Could he be the mastermind?

Ari chan

Kenshin! *sob*

Ari chan

Geez that was a heart stopper. *_* Poor Kaoru. ( She doenst understand. T_T

Ari chan