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Reviews For: Colors of Summer

Nifer
2008-01-03
ch 1, anon.
abuseWow. I love how the story feels like it makes a circle- away from pain and then back again. Too many authors do not acknowledge how long it takes to heal. And it made me laugh how Melchior is perceptive enough to notice Ernst and Hanschen. The only thing that made me curious is why you would think Melchior would be around to witness all of this. He has no home in the village- his parents kicked him out and his friends are dead. I always assumed he moved on to a city somewhere.
GreyTwine
2008-01-01
ch 1,
abuseI very much liked the end. I didn't so much find Herr Steifel's reaction realistic. However, I did like the description of Ilse.
EnjoyingObsession
2007-11-06
ch 1,
abuseThat was gorgeous. I love how it fits in with its companion story.
Julietx3Montague
2007-09-25
ch 1,
abuseWow, that last line is so heart-breaking!
Miss Wallflower
2007-06-30
ch 1,
abuseOhh... that's beautiful. Devastating, but beautiful.
grasping at pearls
2007-06-28
ch 1,
abuseOh, the ending bit about Wendla really got to me. It's really so sad. Every time I see the show, Those You've Known has me crying like a baby.

Anyway! Beautiful job. I hope to see more SA stuff from you!
Phantoms Little Lotte
2007-06-25
ch 1,
abuseWow...that was beautiful...

Sorry it took me so long to review! There wasn't a link in your message and when I tried to go to your page, my internet froze...every...time...and...*sighs*

ANYWAY, I came back just now and I'm so glad I did because that was gorgeous. Especially the part about Ilse. I definitely got tears in my eyes.
stars_inthe_sky (LJ)
2007-06-25
ch 1, anon.
abuseSimple and pretty-- well done.
The Pixess
2007-06-22
ch 1,
abuseI loved this, especially the part about Isle. Poor Melchior; I'm glad he's dealing with it though. Very creative, very discriptive, very sad, and *one last very, hold on you can make it* VERY good.

~Pixie
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