 amethyst-dreams27 2009-05-30 . chapter 1*sniffles* Gahh, you're making me cry! This story was so sweet. I think that whoever it was who requested this particular sentence to be made into a further one-shot made a very good choice. You also gave it a very good plot, esp. with the mask-has-oxygen-must-save-Raven-with-it thing. Very smart! Tu est intelligente! (I'm trying to add French so that I can delude myself into thinking that I'm actually studying and not procrastinating horribly.)
Awesome work! I think this is your best story (that I've read of yours) so far. |
 pinkparis 2008-07-28 . chapter 1Great story! |
 Ishii Sen Ling 2008-07-28 . chapter 1That was so cute! Congratulations it was awsome! |
 Quna 2008-03-31 . chapter 1Wow! It was so touching! I love it:) |
 pointless love forever 2008-02-28 . chapter 1so beautiful *wipes a tear from her eye* and how did Raven end up in the water |
 Chi Yagami 2008-02-05 . chapter 1o! HEART! soo cute |
 BlueAndBooks 2007-12-13 . chapter 1Aw... so sweet...
Maybe some sort of more noticable break between where Red X blacked out and when he blinked would have been nice, but other than that, no room for complaint. |
 dragonprincess1988 2007-10-09 . chapter 1well written nice little one shot |
 S.H.Nina 2007-07-12 . chapter 1Aw
Number 13 was my favorite line of yours, so I was excited to see that you had indeed expanded on it.
So sweet.
: ) |
 liliac gurl 2007-06-30 . chapter 1aw such a sweet story you could make this into a longer story :D:D |
 DataX 2007-06-25 . chapter 1Aw... Thats so swet. Man... Write another story!
With Love,
DataX |
 SanzoGirl 2007-06-22 . chapter 1so good!!^^ |
 Toxxica 2007-06-21 . chapter 1There is not nearly enough RedXRae. WRITE MORE. I'm on my knees here, post another story!!XD |
 Dani 2007-06-21 . chapter 1 Oh, I'm so glad you did this. It was different than I expected but still very interesting to read. Well done and thank-you! |
 BlackVelvetBand 2007-06-21 . chapter 1That was beautiful. There isn't enough Red-X/Rae fanfiction in the world, least of all stories that are actually good. Keep up the fabulous job!
Cryssi |