*sniffles* Gahh, you're making me cry! This story was so sweet. I think that whoever it was who requested this particular sentence to be made into a further one-shot made a very good choice. You also gave it a very good plot, esp. with the mask-has-oxygen-must-save-Raven-with-it thing. Very smart! Tu est intelligente! (I'm trying to add French so that I can delude myself into thinking that I'm actually studying and not procrastinating horribly.)
Awesome work! I think this is your best story (that I've read of yours) so far.

Great story!

That was so cute! Congratulations it was awsome!

Wow! It was so touching! I love it:)

so beautiful *wipes a tear from her eye* and how did Raven end up in the water

o! HEART! soo cute

Aw... so sweet...

Maybe some sort of more noticable break between where Red X blacked out and when he blinked would have been nice, but other than that, no room for complaint.

well written nice little one shot

Aw
Number 13 was my favorite line of yours, so I was excited to see that you had indeed expanded on it.
So sweet.
: )

aw such a sweet story you could make this into a longer story :D:D

Aw... Thats so swet. Man... Write another story!

With Love,
DataX

so good!!^^

There is not nearly enough RedXRae. WRITE MORE. I'm on my knees here, post another story!!XD

Oh, I'm so glad you did this. It was different than I expected but still very interesting to read. Well done and thank-you!

That was beautiful. There isn't enough Red-X/Rae fanfiction in the world, least of all stories that are actually good. Keep up the fabulous job!

Cryssi