I'd read the story before. But don't really remember the initial configuration. This version however, is nicely broken into easily manageable pieces and flows smoothly.

YAY i'm no longer a psyco killer and you fixed the hair thing

Awesome story!!

Fantastic so far!

Good work.
Keep writing, I really enjoyed this story.
GSR all the way!

i hate you for this
the facts aren't even riught
vcr im not from there
it's kamloops
next time i see you i am going to make this story sound cheesy like i always do

nice, great work!

That was fabulous Carrie! Actually, I think I've watched all of... 2 episodes of CSI ever but y'know, I felt the need to read this! Great story, crazy story line... and everyone knew track and field was evil, right? :P

~Kayla

WOW Carrie! as much as i hate murder and all that i LOVED this story! it was amazing! honestly you are so good at writing stories!
love
your #1 Fan! lol

Nice story! :)

I love this story and i'm in it yay i just have to say in that story i was wonderful amazing

and the writing was amazing and i just love this story

Yay, you fianlly put our story up! Anyway, this is by far my favorite of your stories. (The ones that I've read at least.) Oh and by the way, sorry again for missing that one error with Shane's hair. I'll try to be a better editor next time!

Holy Tolido this was awesome! Loved it!