 Siahposh 2008-11-23 . chapter 4can`t wait for another chapter! XD |
 BondSlave 2008-09-18 . chapter 4I rather enjoy this story, do continue please.
I enjoy the idea of Holmes forgetting himself.
~LondonDetective~ |
 Lady Katelynna 2008-09-09 . chapter 4This is...interesting I like it |
 amalcolm1 2008-08-22 . chapter 1I'm intrigued so far. This is the first Holmes with amnesia story I've read, surprisingly. As soon as I read that's what you were doing, I thought "brilliant"! Surprised I haven't seen such a thing so far.
Your Holmes reminds me of J.A. Roberts, a very good ff writer who also writes under the name Tony Vernon-Smith. You write him sort of blunt, his heart buried deep within himself. Surely Watson will be able to pull it out, though. ;)
If I had to offer a criticism, I would suggest slowing down a bit. You seem to have rushed to get Holmes back to London and back to Watson, and while I understand that, I also want more of a characterisation of Morgan, her husband and more of Holmes brooding.
But I'm very intrigued to see where you take this and what it takes for SH to get his memory back. |
 LA Suka 2008-08-21 . chapter 4don't forget Mycroft! |
 LA Suka 2008-07-24 . chapter 2Glad you finally updated this. I hope something good happens while he's in London. |
 A.K.Rai 2007-07-30 . chapter 1Please continue, slash can have it's moments *shifty look* so carry on the way you were going. |
 sholzel 2007-07-14 . chapter 1My dear, pray continue.
Oh... and I will NOT insist that you write a non-slash version! *wicked grin* |
 LA Suka 2007-07-04 . chapter 1Please continue!! |
 Pandora de Romanus 2007-07-04 . chapter 1So far, so good... I Want more. How did he found his way back to Watson? Keep writting! |
 Gia Kohana 2007-06-23 . chapter 1Good beginning...I particularly like the doctor!
Add another request for the non slash version, though I'll continue to read the slashy one too! |
 Susicar 2007-06-22 . chapter 1Si, si, si, of course i WANT the non-slash version. Neverteless,i read both, and monday i send my opinions. Thank for your work. |