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| Anon 2006-12-07 ch 7, anon. | abusePlease update this awesome fic. I love Jim and Hanmyo. |
| Deragonmaji 2004-10-15 ch 7,  | abuse*growls* You evil evil person! *thumbs up* Good fic. Update soon! ^ ^ = ~_~ = Its Ashia! \/-_-\/ Lil' Jim! |
| Dragon Trainer 2004-04-17 ch 7, | abuseHah, this is funny! I thought it was going to be more towards angsty than comedy, ~Wipes tears from my eyes~ Okay, now serious! Great story, and finish it soon. Now for my one and final complaint. Could you please stop ending your chapters with unconsciousness. You only manage to miss it for one chapter(not count the memo), and if one more of your chapters end with unconciousness I'm going to black out too. Geesh, I'm starting to feel faint now as it is. ANyway, great story and I can't wait for the next chapter. |
| Dragon Trainer 2004-04-17 ch 3, | abuseHm, great story so far, and I know I shouldn't say anything, but I really dislike the second chapter. The whole bomb thing was stupid, and hurting Hanmyo for no reason was even worst. I mean throughout the entire show it was more likely that Melfina would get the door before anyone else, beside that's just stupid to just random place a bomb where anyone can get it, and the Macdougalls are not stupid. Anyone who can survive being killed are anything but stupid. |
| BlueMizuno 2003-10-13 ch 7, | abuse^^ Good story! |
| Chasm 2003-03-28 ch 7, | abuseI think I know what's about to happen. Let's see if I'm right, get on with chapter 8! More! |
| Chasm 2003-03-28 ch 1, | abuseHarry is CROSSDRESSING? Eh, I'm not surprised... |
| EdenEight 2003-03-28 ch 7, | abuseAww I am really anxious to see how their plan goes. Poor Jim, it's so sad he really thinks he's loosing Mel and he's too weak to even say goodbye. Sniff, anyway, keep writing I really wanna hear how this develops. |
| EdenEight 2003-02-23 ch 6, | abuseyour story has a real sweet essence to it, I hope everything will work out for everyone, except the McDougal Brothers of course. Please keep writing, I would luv to hear what more is to come |
| purpledragon 2003-02-18 ch 6, anon. | abusewow i'm so glad u finaly wrote more of this. i read it a long time ago and gave up on ever finding out what happened to jim. i liked the not so evil form of torture it's a nice change from the painfull kind everyone else puts jim through. really good can't wait to find out how it ends. :) |
| Jaid Skywalker 2003-02-17 ch 6, | abuselol, I love it! Can't wait for more. |
| Ami Winner 2003-02-17 ch 6, | abuseOkay o.O; It was good, the doctor sorta was a bit weird. Keep writing! |
| The Haunted 2003-02-13 ch 4, anon. | abusecant beleave this story is back on the shelves and with new prints tooo |
| Rose Magenta 2003-02-13 ch 4, | abuseGreat story so far! I love fics that include the MacDougalls! Keep adding more! |
| Ami Winner 2002-12-23 ch 2, | abuseVery good story line! But isn't Hanmyo dead? Never mind! keep writing! |