 I am Unique 2009-12-08 . chapter 31Thank you very much for taking the time to write this absolutely brilliant fanfiction. I have always thought of writing a ff where harry or a group of his friends fix all the things that are wrong in the wixarding world but I never thought of it the way you did. The idea about the company is absolutely brilliant and I really really hope you carry on writing this story.
There were just two things I would like to point out.
1) In many of the earlier chapters you misspelt Quidditch. You might want to go and fix that.
2) In the letters to Remus you some times talk in cellphone language. e.g like 'Congrats' instead of 'Congratulations' and also using acronyms like 'TTYL'. Maybe it is just me but I don't think people spoke like that in the early 90s
Thank you again and good luck for your future
Iamunique |
 vintageumbrella 2009-12-04 . chapter 31I like the chapter. Are you planning on hurrying things up though? The pace of the story seems a bit slow.
I hope you update soon. This story is such a gem buried under countless of other fics with a similar plot but with horrendously bad writing. |
 kyuubi shadow 2009-11-24 . chapter 19YOU ARE F*G AMAZING! |
 AramilOniasha 2009-11-19 . chapter 12Did the potion destroy the diary, or mark it in an obvipous way? If not, then why did harry keep, and not return it to Malfoy, tricking voldemort ino thinking it was still safe? |
 monkei10 2009-11-17 . chapter 31So far this story is great! i wish there was more magic but i can't wait till nxt chappie! |
 Enchantress of the Wolves 2009-11-11 . chapter 31Please Update! I've been patient! This is an amazing story, with a unique and fasinating plot line. It is also one of my very favourite stories. At the risk of sounding like a parrot,PLEASE UPDATE! |
 D.J.J.L.D.H.B.'M-PC'7th STEVE 2009-11-06 . chapter 23This is truly a good story. I very much enjoy reading it again. I wish you would get back to it. I only have one tenny wenny little complaint.
It would be nice if you used the (PERIOD) at least once in awhile. -lol- There are a few spelling and/or type-Os errors as well but not too bad there. It is the lack of the (.) that really dismays me. It nor any other end of sentence punctuation is totally missing in this story. *Grins*
That makes it sound in a text-2-speech reader like one really, really long, run on sentence.
Apart from that, is there any chance you might get back to it some year, preferably before I get too much older? -lol-
Steve |
 SolemnXAngel 2009-11-05 . chapter 1This is starting off a little too familiar way like S'TarKan's Harry Potter and the Nightmare of Futures Past... Also, the same with chapter two. What did you do? Steal his story and then twist it? Can't read this crap. |
 jonez227 2009-10-30 . chapter 31BU-BU-BU-BU-BU-BU-BUT where's the rest of it? Why are you playing such a mean joke on us fanfictioners? (idk if that's a real word) EPIC SAD FACE :-( I may start having withdrawals. it's such a wonderful story and it cuts off right at the climax-ish. plus, who the hell is harry gonna be with? NEED MORE STORY!
Jone-Z |
 smargden 2009-10-24 . chapter 31I'm re-reeding the stoy - is it abandon?
Best regards
Smargden |
 Nargus 2009-10-24 . chapter 25I'd rather you not conjure up unrealistic obstacle for him though. He did come back through time anyway and have lots more experience in it! |
 Nargus 2009-10-24 . chapter 23Personally, I believe the Goblin don't have wands because of the same reason the house-elves don't have one. I believe they simply do wandless magic by nature. |
 Ashans21 2009-10-08 . chapter 2WICKED! |
 Thanalluria 2009-10-06 . chapter 7 It's Zabini not zambini |
 smaginn 2009-10-06 . chapter 31The pairing- I'm rooting for Luna, though it'll probably be Hermione, or... Pansy?
Anyway, this is a great story, and I personally know how hard it is to update. Just remember there are many faithful readers out there!!
x Smaginn
PS. It is Zabini, not Zambini? Sorry- he is one of my fave. characters, and it generally annoys me. :) |