I REALLY LIKED IT. IT WAS REALLY CUTE. I HOPE THAT I CAN READ MORE OF YOUR STORIES.

that was really good great job OH!and 1 more thing i do know why.

Y'know, for a short fic, this is really adorable. I'm a MiTama fangirl, so you'll have to excuse me for this... but I do believe I'm blushing. *giggles*

That was unbelievably short for such an amazing fanfic. It shouldn't have stopped there (however much of a Hotohori fangirl you are)! Anyway, it was nicely written and very cute. Well done.

This story is complete? NO! You can't just end it like that! WHY! But I thought you did a pretty good job.

aw how cute. i like the story so far. please continue.

Cute...lol.