I love your story. It's really creative and connects two works that just fit perfectly. Please continue to update.

It's been a long time since I looked at this story. I'm not sure why, really, it was quite good. I guess it was the timing when I first started reading it. Anyway, this was a very interesting chapter, and a vast improvement over the last one. You seem to have eradicated your run-on sentences, and your grammar is, while not perfect, certainly good enough for me to understand what you're saying and enjoy it. Technically, this was an excellent chapter.

Structurally, it was great too. I loved how you jumped around the circle like that, the way you wrote it made the whole thing come alive. I was wondering how you were going tie Death Note into this, and I see it now, and it seems to be working so far. Though, I don't think Mikami would claim to be an expert in revenge. Revenge isn't QUITE what he's doing, it's more like protecting the innocent, AVENGING them, which is something different, or eliminating evil. Revenge is more personal, and I don't think that that fits Mikami. But that's the only real problem I have with this piece.

Over all, great job.

VERY interesting. so Raito will go to Ai's place after he dies. And it looked like L was there too, for some reason. I LOVE this story, it's excellent!

well , that's a LOVELY fan fic . I tried so hard to find Jigoku Shoujo fan fic in this site , and you know what ? this is the best Jigoku Shoujo fan fic I've ever found in this site . especially , you're crossovering it with Death Note . oh my .. that's so nice !

I hope you'll continue this fic quickly !

I can't wait to read another chapter !

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You have no idea how thankful I am for this story, I've been looking for Jigoku Shoujo fanfics for AGES! There is no JS category on this site, and I can't understand why... The fact that you made it a crossover with Death Note, which is my favorite anime, is even greater! I've been thinking about DN and JS crossovers for a long time, since these two anime seem to simply fit with each other! Anyway, Ryuuzaki? That's nice, so he'll make an appearance as well, even though he's dead. This fic is bound to be VERY interesting!

Great chapter!

This is a great story! Please update soon, I want to read what happens next!

so awsome. :] update. please! :]

I see that you have made plenty of alterations and good additions are always welcome to further pleasantly complicate the plot. Good job Harley. :]

Another well-written story! Keep updating, I'm very curious about this crossover. You write Ai so well, I love it!

helow did you remake all of the chapters? uhuhuhuhu

well anyway, ganbatte ne! I'll always cheering for you even when I'm invisible (I mean when I'm nowhere to be seen... don't take it the wrong way...)

nice plz update!

Hi! I'm trying to stay up all night so I can sleep on my flight to Japan, so I figured I'd use some of that time to check out your work. ; Anyway, so far I'm impressed! I thought I'd check this one out, since I have seen a few episodes of Jigoku Shojo, and I thought it would make a good crossover with Death Note! I like this, and I'd like to see where you take it, if you plan on continuing. It was a little confusing in parts...I thought Otaru was Light and I was thinking he was really OOC, but then I find out he's someone else...I would recommend saying that on the outset. Also you need to watch which tense you use, you keep switching from present to past. All in all, nice work!

Wow... that's all I can say. Wow.

Good chapter. Keep going please.