I really thought this story had been dumped altogether, lol. I was really shocked when I got a notification via e-mail that told me a new chapter was added to this.

It doesn't seem like you've lost anything, but now that I myself have matured and become a much more experienced writer, I can see some things that need fixing. Most of the time, it was just that there were words missing. I'll give examples of what I mean.

"We are in crisis," Flame began.

This should read: "We are in a crisis," Flame began.

A stare from Flame before he continued.

This should read: A stare came from Flame before he continued.

Also, at the end of the chapter, Artemis just starts talking without the reader knowing that he was in the scene or has entered it. This could leave them confused for a second.

Other than that, there were some minor spelling mistakes and some comma usage that could be fixed. They're nothing glaring, but changing them could help create better reading flow.

Keep it up! :)

Pity, we didn't get to see Jorcy getting assaulted by Artemus' jokes. Somehow, Kaida's meeting with Jorcy again just seemed a bit casual. A bit rushed perhaps, I'm not too sure.

Well, you can always count on 'secret government organizations' to do stuff that don't always make sense, heh.

Look Who's Back! Loved the Remark about the Terrorist Fringe Group "Al-Toddlers"! Less Blah Blah, More Zoom Zoom Car Chases!

I likey. Flamedramon has always been my favorite. :P

Not bad. Certainly not pleasant, but that's understandable. I like that Artemis actually cooperated for once when he recognized the seriousness of the situation. Cool beans. :)

Now that I'm up-to-date with this story, you'll be seeing some more reviews from me.

Your writing has gotten better, for sure. And you had me grimacing for about half of chis chapter! Just goes to show how good you are at immersing the reader. ;)

And what character from nightdragon0's "Digimorphs" did you reference? It's been about 2 years since I read that story from beginning to end.

Yup, I noted the reference. Thanks!

It's quite amusing how Flame has to say that it'll hurt a lot. I don't think that's very comforting.

You know, did Flame still leave Jorcy tied down? Cause I don't think the latter really wants to hear more of Artemus' jokes.

Hmm, are they being rather quick in letting Artemus in on their group's activities?

Well, At Least it is Not a Painful a Dropping a W16 Engine and Transmission Set on BOTH FEET...

*PING* (The Sound an Engine Chain Makes when it Breaks)

*CRUNCH* (The Sound a W16 Engine and Transmission Set Landing on Feet)

Uh Oh...Better Get The Clear...AH &(*#%$ %*&&(*&%* THAT HURT!

Another excellent chapter. So now that I'm up to date and everything, maybe I can get back to some real work :)

Wogan

Hahaha. "Let's hear it for an original fucking idea!" Brilliant!

Man, you've certainly learned a lot since I first met you. Invisible is excellent on all points. There's really nothing I can complain about.

(Though you might want to consider the fact that Jorcy's iPod seems to have become an iPhone before it turned into a digivice)

Keep it going!

Wogan

Nothing to advise-this is easily your best work on the site so far.

-N

Good lord... are you sure YOU wrote this? XD

That was an incredibly well-paced fight scene. Towards the beginning, it didn't seem like it was going to work, but you pulled it off. I'm quite pleasantly surprised. Write more fight scenes listening to U2, alright? There was a lot of improvement shown in this one over the last.

Keep it up, you. And, when I start to put up my fanfics, you better review those even if you don't know what they'll be about. XP

It seems like Jorcy has to fight a lot of his former allies in this one.

Hmm...so Flame has been under the impression that Jorcy wanted Jet 'out of the way'? It's never seemed that way before, but we never really got to see what Flame was thinking at the end of the first story either.

Now Flame finds Artemus funny and Jorcy finds him annoying. Man, what a contrast!

SAUSAGE!

Oh yeah, interesting chapter.

That must be some sense of deja vu ending up back on the same beach & crashing his car.