After having rewatched 'Secretary' I was curious to see if there was any fanfic...and lo and behold, there is!

Not too shabby - do you plan on continuing it? I'd love to hear your explanation of why Edward was afraid of his wife, that part never really was explained in the movie, was it?

What a wonderful appetizer to whet our taste buds. I laughed out loud when I read that E. Edward and Alan Shore are cousins...what a peculiar family that must be!! I will be excitedly awaiting your next chapter. For me you have caught very nicely the essence of these two characters.

You have done a wonderful job bringing
Lee and E. Edward Grey back to life! I really hope that you will write more chapters to your story containing these two wonderful characters. Well done, and please continue.

Yay Secretary fanfiction! I love that movie and your fic is a great continuation. I hope you haven't abandoned it!

Do you realize how hard it is to find a secretary fanfic either with Lee or with someone else...(as long as theres Edward Grey). This is only the second one I found (and by the way its great) so please update soon!

-Alj

I just saw this movie and absolutely adored it! I love your fic, did you ever consider continuing this?

Nice, It's very good idea to start with. However, I think you should maybe go into a little more depth with her walk and interaction with Peter. You seem to skip over details, like colors, and textures. But these are core elements to a story. With a little revision this will be a good addition to your story.

Wow, great story.

I loved it! Absolutely fantastic. You captured his voice very well; I would love to see more. Did you watch the movie recently? I watched it for the first time today and thought it delicious. Do write more should you feel the urge!