|Reviews for The Make Up|
| nobody's listenin 6/20/06 . chapter 3
You're a pretty bad writer, but, sadly, you probably have the best Save the Last Dance fanfic out.
| Guitarprincess 1/30/05 . chapter 2
this is so slammin!
| OTHlover04 12/8/04 . chapter 3
sorry, no suggestions. this is a good story.
| singingbella 11/1/04 . chapter 3
Why dont u talk about issues that they have, or mayba have Derek stay with Sara in the apartment, and then her dad come home and freak, or a pregnancy scare or sumtin like that
| OliviabensonSVU4 6/8/04 . chapter 2
yay-ness! Its awesome! Update soon! Yipee! :)
| SavetheLastDanceFan 12/9/03 . chapter 3
hey, i love it so far... i think u could write when theyre at college appart and how they have a relationship and stuff. k? UPDATE SOON!
| sweet-love16 11/27/03 . chapter 3
how about you write about sarah and derik maybe you can let me say have a great time at each toerha dn met each other anywhere where juliard is and where his school is!
| glitzydancingshoes 8/30/03 . chapter 3
i thought that this was grand. Its geennre was very good and your plot was interesting. Keep it up this was brill!
| awtrfan4eva 4/8/03 . chapter 1
Awesum.. ya u read mine so i read urs;) its freaky cuz we both have a titanic and stld one..:)
| x3 baby james x3 2/12/03 . chapter 3
great story! i luv it! hmm...how bout their tiem in college and what they do together
| CarebearKara 12/27/02 . chapter 3
when i have writer's block it's usually just for one story because i keep getting ideas but i like what you've written so far.
| Becky 12/4/02 . chapter 1
It was awesome that Derrick and Sara made up. They look so cute together. It was nice of Derrick to go to Sara's tryouts. I know that Derrick and Sara will never break up again. Malachi and Nikki will try to break Derrick and Sara up, but it will never work. It was so cute when Derrick kissed Sara when she was asking him why did he go to the tryouts. Nikki will always be jelious of Sara because Sara got Derrick as a boyfriend and she doesn't. Someday, Malacki will become Sara's friend.
| sarah 9/4/02 . chapter 3
ok great so far, !
right what next...well you could have
how well there both doing maybe sara has probs with other jelous students!
And derrick maybe struggleing a bit with the work?that would give em summit to talk about with each summit could happen to chris forsing them to come home and comfort chanile!say meningitos or mumps?ok well not great ideas but at least its a start!hope it helps.
| Sarah 8/13/02 . chapter 1
Great great great...i loved it..plz do some more...i would love to keep up ont his story that u have going!
| icess America 8/3/02 . chapter 3
I'm a fellow writer of Sara and Dereck. When my Second chapter gets up read it the comes insperation