Reviews for Personality swap

Reviews For: Personality swap

mj x2010 2007-06-23 ch 1,	abuseum, SQUEE! i love it. especially Booth's speach. ahh i have to go read the speach again.
A Fellow Writer 2007-06-22 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis was quite a long story, and I had to give it up after a bit. I got lost near the beginning, and the inner thoughts were rather OOC. The whole fic, actually was somewhat OOC (Angela would not cry in happiness over BB. She's not that big a fan girl. She'd grin rather big though.) The grammar was off, and may I suggest changing "fifty quid" to "one hundred dollars"? Most of the American readers (where Bones orginated) probably have no idea what you're talking about. I know I didn't. I had to look it up.
K. 2007-06-22 ch 1, anon.	abuseWhen you write something this long it should be interesting. I gave up in the first 3 lines because, A)Poor syntax, B)Poor grammar, C)Stupid and OOC inner thoughts, D)Boring storyline, E)Flair lacking in writing style, and finally, F)Your misuse of the word 'trait.'
jemb 2007-06-22 ch 1,	abuseI have to admit I was quite confused by this fic. The title and the summary didn't seem to have anything to do with the actual story. From the summary I was expecting a fun story where Brennan found herself doing things like Booth (using her gut etc) and Booth doing things like Brennan (logical thinking etc). But aside from one comment about how Brennan was using her heart instead of her head like him, I didn't see them picking up each others' traits as you stated in the summary. Aside from that the writing of the story was quite good and it seemed to flow as I read it. I did think the declaration of love at the end was little cheesy (for my liking anyway) but hey, its your story.
DaLiza 2007-06-22 ch 1,	abuseVery cute! I enjoyed reading this and look forward to reading more of your work in the future. Keep up the great work!

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