I'm gonna be honest, I didn't love a lot of these drabbles, but this last one Hate Me is enough for me to add it to my favs - I LOVED it, it was fantastic, I wish it were a crazy long multi chapter story =) Great job.

This chapter made my entire week, just thought you should know. I am absolutely in love with this!

*wince* well-written, but as someone who has a mother dying Lupus, and a sister diagnosed with Lupus, a friend diagnosed with Lupus, and has had older relations die of Lupus... it struck a little too close to home.

You did well, kiddo. This is pretty much what happens in an ICU--I've spent a lot of time there and met a lot of Cloud's going thru scarey times like you've written here. Good writing! mc

Wow, this is sure a different setting for our heroes, but they function just as well as they do in the bar/delivery world. You wrote grippingly, and I would have kept reading if there had been more chapters. Very fun read and I have no quibbles! thx mc

A new Horky! I am ecstatic! Well, it's new to me. I have GOT to check my favorite authors profile pages more frequently, and not rely on carrier owl for new (to me) things. This is lovely! Thx mc

This was so adorable! I really loved the way you developed these characters.

I think this chapter was a bit weird because it was too short. I think you should expand it because it seems incomplete.

Normally I don't go for the whole "Prince Cloud and Princess Tifa" stories but this one was AWESOME. *Chuckles* I can SO see them in this!


*POKES* UPDATE SON!

Awesome story! Loved it.

Ok, this whole chapter was cute... but for some reason, Cloud drinking unprecedented amount of milk is what's going to stick with me. I now have this picture in my head of him doing one of those old (god, how old?) milk commercials. They would find some cute male starlet type guy and put him in jeans and a white tee-shirt and a milk mustache.

I absolutely loved this drabble. I happen to be writing a period fic where Cloud is a prince and will probably post the first chapter tonight. I started it a few months ago and wanted to get at least half of it done before posting.
Great job on this one, I love reading your drabbles. Hope to see more soon.

Oh, Horky, you never cease to impress. =D

I read this, all the way through, the other night. It was way past my bed time, (hehe) but I couldn't stop myself.

For a "drabble," there sure was a lot that happened. Character development, romance, action/war... Let me say that the action parts were well done. Been reading some action parts (not in the Action category but still) for the judging, and they haven't been so good. >_< You may not have made the action a focus of the story, but you always cover the details. =)

I haven't read fanfiction for pure pleasure in a long, long while. You make me miss it. As always, great job, Horky!

AW!! I'm in love *goes heart eyed*
*gives cookeh* Great job! :]]

wow...I think I have a fave drabble now...lolz