awesome! I hope you finish it.

Mary

Loving this story...Please continue!

This story is okay. But you make it like Debra's always been the victim. She's done some messed up crap to Ray, too.

Hey Mary. Good job. Like you should really finish it. Its great.

Aw. You're going to make me cry. Of course, it's not that hard. My own stories make me cry. But this is going really well. I liked that you had Robert say everything he did to Ray. I hope they work things out. Update soon!

It's a very good start. But please don't make them split up! As much of a jerk as Ray is, I still think they make the cutest couple. Anyway, please update soon!