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| Dragonpuppy Aelita 2008-05-25 ch 20, | abuseI just tried to add this story to my favorites. It turns out it was already there. GREAT JOB, RANDOM PERSON. |
| brainof7 2008-05-07 ch 1, | abuseit was pretty good, i read a lot of it at once. I would not use author's notes whcih interupt the story, it made me concentrate more on why you put it in, and made me feel alientated from the false reality you created. |
| Terminator101 2008-05-05 ch 20, | abusei like it wright more |
| Capital-C 2008-04-29 ch 20, | abuseIn closing, I will say this much. When I first saw the title of this story, I thought it looked interesting. When I read the description, it looked even more interesting. When I actually started reading the story itself, I knew it was good. 20 |
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