Awesome, enough said.

it was really funny when aelita said she was getting pissed at jeremie

I just tried to add this story to my favorites.
It turns out it was already there.
GREAT JOB, RANDOM PERSON.

it was pretty good, i read a lot of it at once. I would not use author's notes whcih interupt the story, it made me concentrate more on why you put it in, and made me feel alientated from the false reality you created.

i like it wright more

In closing, I will say this much.
When I first saw the title of this story, I thought it looked interesting. When I read the description, it looked even more interesting. When I actually started reading the story itself, I knew it was good.
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