What!? Carlisle DIED. That reminds me of I Am Legend, sorry, but I hated that movie. But your story, although GREAT, reminded me of that self-sacrifice JUNK that they both have in common. Ugh. I cried SO HARD. But, it was great. In a depressing emo way. But, still great. (Oh, and the way I keep using the phrase " in an emo way" doesnt mean that I am not friends with emo people. Actually, basically all but one of my friends isnt, but that is beside the point. All I wanted to say here is that "emo" in my case is not a derogatory term, so sorry if I offended)

I loved it. The thing with the policemen at the end was hilarious, in a sad, emo sort of way. By the way, do they think that something is up with that, and, even, is Charlie one of those police officers? Because I remember in New Moon, I think, when she said all FOUR of the police officers, and I remember thinking that Charlie was included in those, but, of course, they could be from a different town, too, so, I guess that it doesnt matter too much, and I NEED to go on to the next chapter. O happy day!

ok. this story is written AMAZINGLY. It makes me feel sick to think that that could happen. I was AFRAID, can you believe it? And I cried some too. Ugh, I'm too much like Bella in that respect, crying, but the bravery thing is SO not me. But, the thing with Rosalie made me smile, a little bit, and so I decided to tell you: THIS STORY ROCKS!

wow. that was AMAZING. I loved it! Please continue! :)

I really liked this chapter, but i think you should add one more. I mean, you can't just kill Carlisle and then end it! That's the only thing, otherwise it was good!

Wow. Wow. Wow. That's really almost all I can say. Very very very well written. I waited until I read the last chapter to review it =P It's sad though, I can't believe Carlisle died.

I hope you don't mind that I added this to my C2 Community ^^ I dunno, it was random?

Hey! Great stories... just thought it was neat how you incorporated the Buffy/Angel love with Bella/Edward. =)

Well that was. . .interesting. Cool. . .well, beyond normal description anyway. Keep writing!

~Dani~

I believe that Carlisle would really do that for his family! Great story so proud in a way lol not like that lol

aww! so sad! but i loved the really original idea for the plot. definitely havent seen this one before which is good in my book. some of the time, the story seemed to be accelerating a little to fast and i had to stop and think about what was going on. other than that, it was a good story that used alot of the characters in good ways.

i must say im depressed. carlisle so can never die- none of the cullens are allowed to- theyre all too...idk important lol. whats esme going to do? i liked it so much though, that was completely unexpected and my mouth was hanging open in shock for a while there haha

CARLISLE!
OMG!
i liked the ending; bitter sweet. :)
but..
CARLISLE!
>_<
it was great hough. xD

um... HUH?? I don't really understand what just happened... =\ can you explain it to me? :]

thank you!! =]

omg.
not carlisle!

So you aren't going to do an epilogue?

It'd be nice to have something in Edward's point of view...maybe some angst...

-nudge, nudge.-