Good one this is a great series so far

Hi... Me again... *Ahem* I wanted to apologize, and let you know that it is in fact not your story that is not working, but the site... Other stories are doing it too, but other sites aren't... So... Sorry for wasting your time and/or making you worry. I'd still like to read more though, if it's not too much trouble. :)

Hi. Well, chapters 8 and 9 don't work either, but I would still like to read more of this story. Maybe you could re-upload them or something? Also, is there going to be more chapters?

Hi... Chapter 7 also doesn't work...

Hi... I like your story so far, but it won't let me read chapter 4... It keeps saying there was an error... I kind of wanted to read it...

Poor Bluestreak...why is it ALWAYS Bluestreak? The image that last piece conjures is absolutely hilarious.

I could probably count the times I have burst out laughing at the last line of a fic on the fingers of one finger: this chapter. Sh*tstreaker, indeed.

Watching 'Streaker freak out? Worth the price of admission right there.

Except with Vaeru, there is no price of admission. All funny, all the time. Even when truthful and poignant, still funny.

Poor Ratchet. Every day-cycle a new learning experience.

I adore this story. (If I had enough frames, I would print out "Juxtaposition" and frame it. But I love this "outtake" of it as well.) It's so logical - it's what one would do if one were faced with a fragile, tiny, sentient prisoner/pet. Wouldn't one?

Poor Evelyn. The stupid human tricks are not so easy as they look.

She never knew she'd have a second career as an Autobot LOLcat.

This is the equal of one of the funniest sci-fi stories I have ever read. That work is called "Even the Queen," and if I recall correctly, won a Hugo. Is this that good? Yes, it is. If fanfics got Hugos, this would get the Booker Prize.

One's sympathies are equally divided between Ratchet and Bluestreak. That is, once one finishes laughing one's sympathetic aft off.

Yeah, and as well as ejecting the errant food particle, the Heimlich maneuver makes the victim throw up in about 70% of all cases. I can hear Sunstreaker now: "Euuw! Organic sludge!"

You know it would have to be like this. It would absolutely go down this way.

Snort. (Too old to giggle.)

I think it very probably that Vaeru could compose a grocery list which would have one falling on the floor with laughter. I was swapping IMs with another TF reader on the site, and she agrees with me that Vaeru, when it comes to TF humor, is the ne plus ultra of writers. It don't get no better'n this.