I thought that as well and got kinda mad at those two--Melanie and all the others were just too strong at that point. Early on you can't even damage them at all.
You made Senel give a good argument. ^^ I liked it. *whispers*...Will should have been paying more attention to his surroundings instead of a dead monster. *nod*

Will: *Thwack*

Me: >_

Yeah it was rather arrogant of Will to think the Terrors wouldn't have taken Shirley if he were there. Good job on that.

I think it was better if Senel went alone. After all, Valcv and his troops could kill the whole gang if Senel stayed with them!

Anyway, they seem pretty much in character and I didn't see any errors! Nice job~!

You know, I wondered why Senel didn't bring up that point too. If anything, bringing the others along would've made the situation worse. I mean, who knows if Stella would've been able to save them all. Things might've worked out better with though.