|
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| deeps85 2008-08-18 ch 17, | abuselooks like a strong companionship is being formed between ex-professor and ex-student i love it |
| Jibbzy 2008-08-16 ch 17, | abuseHi! I'm sorry I haven't written for so long, but my internet broke and then I went on holiday... The story just keeps getting more and more exciting... I hope you'll be able to update soon! :) Thank you for writing such a good story!! :) |
| Mikee 2008-07-31 ch 17, | abuseWell now, that was quite a chapter. So much happened. I was at first alarmed by Molly's reaction to Hermione, but when Hermione dropped the transfiguration, it was nice to see a little of the Molly of old. I felt very sorry for Arthur -- keeping that wand as got to be keeping the pain of loss so much sharper than it needs to be. I'm also wondering of that wand is adding to the family's pain -- after all, it had been used for so much evil that I can imagine it just emits evil. I really liked all the bits with and about Severus. That part by the tree with all those Death Eaters seeming to appear one after another in ... what ... the body (for lack of a better word) of a demon...? Creepy. I liked Hermione's talk with Severus, too, and am quite looking forward to seeing where that leads. Looking forward to more. Thank you. |
| duj 2008-07-31 ch 17, | abuseMy favourite part of this chapter is the vision of the tree changing colour. Very beautiful visual. Pity it quickly turns sour. |
| misundersnape 2008-07-30 ch 17, | abuseOh wow. Where you are going with this is absolutely captivating! The plot is, and has always been, exceptional, Lady Memory. I'm positively dying to know what happens when Severus and Hermione brew the potion, and whether or not they will have success. Severus truly is his own worst enemy, isn't he, constantly thinking cynical thoughts and second guessing his friends sincerity at every turn. I'm hoping that by the end of this he finally can accept that he is not alone in this world, and that he is cared for by a great many people, and lastly that he is genuinely worthy of it! 'Til next time, misundersnape... |
| Silverthreads 2008-07-30 ch 17, | abuseWow. This chapter is awesome! |
| whitehound 2008-07-30 ch 17, | abuseVery good and convincing, and at least his low expectations turned out to be wrong, at least in part. |
| Konekko 2008-07-08 ch 16, | abuseCarissima! Avevo abbandonato la lettura di questa tua storia perchè mi era insopportabile leggere della grande sofferenza di Severus, soprattutto perchè il nefasto libro di DH era così vivo nella mia memoria. Invece, adesso che un tempo sufficiente è passato, ho deciso di rituffarmi nella lettura di questa splendida storia, e, con somma gioia, ti ringrazio per avermi fatto passare qualche ora immersa in un racconto ben scritto, originale, e assolutamente appassionante! Leggendo tutto d'un fiato, troppo spesso il mio cuore si è stretto di fronte al palpabile dolore di Severus, e avrei voluto catapultarmi in questo tuo mondo per abbracciarlo stretto stretto, nonostante sia lui stesso, in gran parte, causa del suo stesso soffrire. E, ommioddio, cos'è questa storia che Voldemort è ancora in giro?! E' spaventoso! Mi hai fatto quasi fare un salto sulla sedia mentre leggevo :P I membri del Ministero della Magia meritano di ardere tutti su una graticola bella calda, mentre a tutti quelli che ancora non si fidano di Severus darei una bella ripassata a suon di scapaccioni! Harry, sebbene a volte sia abbastanza insopportabile, non è malaccio, mentre Hermione...be'! Lo sai che ho un debole per lei e Snape insieme, e anche se so che la tua storia non vuole andare a parare lì, non posso fare a meno di intravedere fantastiche possibiltà tra loro due in questo frangente ;D Ma la cosa più bella è che Severus è l'assoluto protagonista di questa storia: tutti gli altri non suonano che come comparse, importanti per dare contorno a questo viaggio doloroso e necessario, che il nostro amato protagonista deve compiere pe rpoter finalmente guarire il proprio cuore e la propria anima. Forza Severus! So che sei presissima in questo periodo stella, ma questa storia merita, MERITA, di essere aggiornata! Spero che accada presto! Un gran bacio e buona giornata! The Ghost Owl |
| Master Of Sorrow 2008-06-16 ch 1, | abuseLady Memory? You use words that hit like thunder! |
| A-zla 2008-05-19 ch 1, | abuseUna storia molto interessante! Mi è piaciuto moltissima. Da un rapporto speciale a Snape. Spero che ritroverà un po piu speranza e affeto presto... Tanti saluti dalla Germania! |
| misundersnape 2008-05-18 ch 16, | abuseAnd Harry is sucked back in -- nicely manipulated Sev! Well things can only get more interesting from here. Looking forward to more. (PS Always happy to recieve advance readings if you're willing to share them with me ;) ) Peyton is good. Sleeping well still and is growing bigger already. I'll try again with the photos, but something about this computer isn't working the same as my old one. Sorry - but I'll work it out eventually. Later... misundersnape... |
| Jibbzy 2008-05-17 ch 16, | abuseWow! It's great. Just like last time! Please please please update very soon (though I know that's probably hard and stuff as you need to write it and stuff... but I'm so hooked!!) :) Jibbzy |
| duj 2008-05-17 ch 16, | abuseHarry didn't really have much of a choice, of course. |
| Mikee 2008-05-16 ch 16, | abuseI liked Hermione arriving 'just in time' and taking care of that nasty Ravenclaw. Oh ... poor Sev. Is it that he suddenly has something evil in him that's preventing him from getting a new wand? Is that a by-product of the 'attack?' I'm glad Harry accepted. I do so hope he'll be able to help Sevvie. Looking forward to more. |
| lidiladilom 2008-05-16 ch 16, | abuseWaoo! Chrystal clear!! When can we see the next chapter? (not-so-subtle hint...) :) |