It was a little OOC, but really funny anyway!

That was hilarious! I LOVED that last Emmett comment. Is it that time of the month already, so fu* awesome! You write awesomely!

i couldn't stop laughing.

LMAO, I really loved this/

exellent,truly exellent

hahaha really good! :)

OME, that was hilarious! She really put her heart out for that cereal... *busts out laughing* I can't keep a straight face and read this, it's too funny! xD

holy cow! so funny! really liked it!

Loved the story and i suck at reviews but i just wanted to tell you that the story is awesome. Especially like the Emmett parts:)

that was funny, that was so funny.

I about DIED laughing. cI have no clue how you come up with it, but this shits HILARIOUS!!

HyperActiveFREAK17:D

HAHA Dang she fought for that cereal! U Bella, if i wer her they'd be on the floor cryin sorry, even with the vampire advantage! That was so cool!

it's so funny! shud do more of this 1 shot!

lol, love this one-shot

HAHAHA! You should do more like this - and feature Jasper and Bella in it. :). Funny!