 EdwardBiteMeAndKissMe 2009-11-19 . chapter 1I love it!
I too once had trouble with cereal in the morning:I tried to tear the bag open.When finally it teared open--it was not easy to open at all,so I had to use all my strength--but my luck , it flew out of my hands across the room.Cereal everywhere.Then I got another bag and thought it was closed.So I--stupidly without looking,of course--tried to tear it open--not realizing it was already open--and the cereal spilled to the floor.I had to clean the whole kitchen and was late for school,and had not eaten breakfast yet!I couldn't believe it!All the trouble and all I wanted was to eat some fucking damn cereal!I also got detention because I was late for class!It wasn't even my fault! |
 alycaly 2009-11-06 . chapter 1It was a little OOC, but really funny anyway! |
 Mordanyes 2009-11-06 . chapter 1That was hilarious! I LOVED that last Emmett comment. Is it that time of the month already, so fu* awesome! You write awesomely! |
 sugarprincess89 2009-10-30 . chapter 1i couldn't stop laughing. |
 shandreee92 2009-10-16 . chapter 1LMAO, I really loved this/ |
 team edward 2009-09-25 . chapter 1 exellent,truly exellent |
 Everso 2009-09-18 . chapter 1hahaha really good! :) |
 squody3015 2009-08-24 . chapter 1OME, that was hilarious! She really put her heart out for that cereal... *busts out laughing* I can't keep a straight face and read this, it's too funny! xD |
 Dr. Fang's Girl 2009-08-16 . chapter 1holy cow! so funny! really liked it! |
 robotschains 2009-08-05 . chapter 1Loved the story and i suck at reviews but i just wanted to tell you that the story is awesome. Especially like the Emmett parts:) |
 kailaann 2009-07-31 . chapter 1that was funny, that was so funny. |
 HyperActiveFreak17 2009-07-17 . chapter 1I about DIED laughing. cI have no clue how you come up with it, but this shits HILARIOUS!!
HyperActiveFREAK17:D |
 the saga lover 2009-07-14 . chapter 1 HAHA Dang she fought for that cereal! U Bella, if i wer her they'd be on the floor cryin sorry, even with the vampire advantage! That was so cool! |
 noni LG 2009-07-11 . chapter 1it's so funny! shud do more of this 1 shot! |
 :) 2009-06-26 . chapter 1 lol, love this one-shot |