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EdwardBiteMeAndKissMe
2009-11-19 . chapter 1
I love it!
I too once had trouble with cereal in the morning:I tried to tear the bag open.When finally it teared open--it was not easy to open at all,so I had to use all my strength--but my luck , it flew out of my hands across the room.Cereal everywhere.Then I got another bag and thought it was closed.So I--stupidly without looking,of course--tried to tear it open--not realizing it was already open--and the cereal spilled to the floor.I had to clean the whole kitchen and was late for school,and had not eaten breakfast yet!I couldn't believe it!All the trouble and all I wanted was to eat some fucking damn cereal!I also got detention because I was late for class!It wasn't even my fault!
alycaly
2009-11-06 . chapter 1
It was a little OOC, but really funny anyway!
Mordanyes
2009-11-06 . chapter 1
That was hilarious! I LOVED that last Emmett comment. Is it that time of the month already, so fu* awesome! You write awesomely!
sugarprincess89
2009-10-30 . chapter 1
i couldn't stop laughing.
shandreee92
2009-10-16 . chapter 1
LMAO, I really loved this/
team edward
2009-09-25 . chapter 1
exellent,truly exellent
Everso
2009-09-18 . chapter 1
hahaha really good! :)
squody3015
2009-08-24 . chapter 1
OME, that was hilarious! She really put her heart out for that cereal... *busts out laughing* I can't keep a straight face and read this, it's too funny! xD
Dr. Fang's Girl
2009-08-16 . chapter 1
holy cow! so funny! really liked it!
robotschains
2009-08-05 . chapter 1
Loved the story and i suck at reviews but i just wanted to tell you that the story is awesome. Especially like the Emmett parts:)
kailaann
2009-07-31 . chapter 1
that was funny, that was so funny.
HyperActiveFreak17
2009-07-17 . chapter 1
I about DIED laughing. cI have no clue how you come up with it, but this shits HILARIOUS!!

HyperActiveFREAK17:D
the saga lover
2009-07-14 . chapter 1
HAHA Dang she fought for that cereal! U Bella, if i wer her they'd be on the floor cryin sorry, even with the vampire advantage! That was so cool!
noni LG
2009-07-11 . chapter 1
it's so funny! shud do more of this 1 shot!
:)
2009-06-26 . chapter 1
lol, love this one-shot
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