Reviews for Our Power Together

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Jawelik 2008-07-05 ch 7,	abuseOkay, I've read your whole Trilogy, and am eagerly devouring every last word of this story too! Your writing just seems to get better and better with each chapter, your characterizations, your dialogue, even those spione tingling twists! They're all top notch! I await your next chapter with bated breath, =) -Jawelik
Isamu 2008-06-15 ch 7,	abuseI agree with Yori, Kim is flipping out... Anyway, I really liked the bit with the villians on the island. Monkey Fist rambaling on about being the King of the Trees was great! Ron going crazy with MMP once again. Boy needs to learn some control. I think the part with Shego and Sim was well executed. I especially liked Sim's reaction to it. And then Dementor sending his team after Wade, huh. Hells yes. That, and probably an influx of villians? Solid all around. Too tired to leave much more then that though.
Netherwood 2008-06-14 ch 7,	abuseHmm... by the time this is all over, Kim will have gone pretty far down the path of almost-villainy, I am thinking. Also, the new Monkey Fist is extremely creepy. Even if the "Give me back my feet!" line is hilarious. Thanks for another wonderful installment :)
Kimin8or 2008-06-14 ch 7,	abuseThat was AWESOME! The thing with Siren Kelp was hilarious. You kept each of the character's traits in line, and it made this chapter breathtaking. Kim is already just hanging on -which is why Ron is usually there to give her some Ronshine - and looks like shes in for an even rougher ride and discovery. I hope Ron,Wade, and Monique are okay...
Drag0nf1y 2008-06-14 ch 7,	abuseGreat stuff!! Keep it up!
CajunBear73 2008-06-14 ch 7,	abusePretty dire straits each has found themselves in here. Confrontations and exclamations all around. Some threads of each far flung team are slowly pulling together, but man it's a slow process. Ron and Monique leaving Wade at Dementor's old broken lair, Kim, Yori, Hana, Rufus and Drakken at an old site of Drakken's with Dr Director waiting them, and a flurry of Dementor's posse off to encounter another part of his plan. Looks like Shego blew off some steam with Sim, and he's going to have more confusion in his life to go with the plot he's been duped into taking part in. From this ending, looks like GJ had an ace up their sleeve about Kim, or had knowledge of such a project... And can Cam be anymore of a pumped up version of Will? Man that's arrogance on steroids. Too bad Dini was pulled further into his web of Du'ism, she had a chance to be a very good agent... CB73
the archduke 2008-06-13 ch 7,	abuseI think I've said this on my last review, but I'll say it again: your Kim is an awesome kick@ss bad@ass. And now with Sim Possible I and II and GJ maybe being involved with some cloning shenanigans? excellent. Yori notices that Kim's just holding on by a thread, and Doctor Director showing up may be the thing that finally sends Kim over the cliff, physically, mentally and emotionally. Looking forward to more - the archduke
Quathis 2008-06-13 ch 7,	abuseNow that was a cliffhanger. That was a surprise. Lots of action and drama. Kim sure looks like she could use some Ronshine. She seems stressed.
RobinofYJ 2008-06-13 ch 7,	abuseFirst off; w00t, we got an update!! After being such a-holes in part 3, you still managed to make the villans human and still in character, great job. And the ending, wow! Now that's a plot twist! After this I'll be surprised if Kim doesn't drag Ron and Hana to some uninhabited, uncharted island. Pfft, allies are so over-rated. Here's to chap. 8! Hope it doesn't take as long, but even if it takes longer, I'll be here, eager to read it!
screaming phoenix 2008-06-13 ch 7,	abuseWow, A lot going on here and worth the wait. The villans seem to have fallen on hard times.Kim is getting more obsessed and Wade is now trapped. And now Kim is about to find out how her clone got started. I think Shego might have done something she didn't expect when she seduced the clone. Poor Ron's team is dwindeling by the day. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
MrDrH 2008-06-13 ch 1,	abuseReally liking the progression of this. Superb seventh chapter 'villains'. I thought Kim's vicious side was well developed and characterised. I confess, the Sim-Shego love scene was a guilt pleasure and seemed very in-character.
MrDrH 2008-06-07 ch 6,	abuseWow, I just read your Kim Possible 'Power' Trilogy plus one and fillers cover to cover (all right, there was a break for sleeping in there. It's long. I'm entitled). I'm also super impressed that you carried through for three full length stories, then decided to write another for the heck of it. Each was better than the last, and reading them was like watching your development as a writer in one of those accelerated, time-delay imagery films. I won't complement everything I enjoyed, we'd be here all day. Only one thing worries me. 'Our Power Together', Six chapters in eight months, then nothing for the next four. I hate begging almost as much as I hate guilt-tripping. Nowhere near as much as I'd hate to have this hanging, unfinished, a loose thread in the fabric of my concious. Please, please finish it (please be physically able to finish it). Even if it takes another year.
Shinato 2008-05-17 ch 6,	abuseAwesome Chapter!
Drag0nf1y 2008-04-04 ch 6,	abuseI've just finished reading the entire trilogy of yours and it is really good. Hope to see more soon!
Netherwood 2008-04-02 ch 6,	abuseWell, it's 6:20 AM, so I don't feel up to trying to dissect the writing to come up with insightful comments about your writing. After all the writing, editing, beta-ing, and rewriting, you probably know what in your story works and doesn't work anyway. So I'll just say that you managed to keep me up to 6:20 AM when I finally realized there were new chapters to this story. Good job. :)

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