This is my first review as far as I can remember.

I've been reading fanfics for over a decade now but never really felt the the need too.

Till now.

So here goes.

Your stories are what keep me coming back here, plain and simple. Thru the years I've scanned the genres and different catergories, hoping to find stories worth reading. One's that knew and respected what character development and plot were all about. One's that could understand drama, comedy, and know when to use them. One's that hold an atmosphere about them. Weaving threads of what made us care for the original story, and intertwining them with new ideas.

Those of the author.

And I can say I have found no better example of this than you. No other author's stories have given me so much as yours. From your Teen Titans to your Harry Potter to your of course Kim Possible tales. I've never been dissapointed, always wanting for more. They've made me run an emotional triathlon, but in a good way. And brought me up on those days when it seems like everthing is just going wrong. Thanks.

And as I look back on what I've wrote, to call this a review would be a downright lie. No. It's more of a plea. And a selfish one at that. I hope you continue with your works. But more too the point, I hope you finish this story. Your final foray into the Kim Possible universe. To end the monsterous trilogy nearly seven years in the making. But really four stories or IV stories if you want to add the aristocratic touch. (Including several side stories but hey how's counting). And put my wondering thoughts of how it will all end to rest.

If I come off as pushy I'm sorry. Desperate sure I'll give you that, but pushy hopefully not. (Ok maybe just a little).

Either way, to write a simple review for this chapter or even just this part of the arc would not do you or the story the justice I belive is deserved. I can't do it and I won't.

So I'll leave it at this. As long as your writing stories here I'll be reading them. And if the time comes and you decide to end this opus, whether it be this year or many more down the road I'll be there too.

Only this time with a real review. And man would that be a great day.

Because after all,

The Best Is Yet To Come!

Wow, D. Director? didn't see that one coming..
i do love it when your stories manage to surprise me. the story is addictive really, i found the power trilogy a week ago and hadn't been able to stop reading till i got to this point. Sure caused some suffering to my school work :P
Anyways, i just wanted to say thank you for a really enjoyable story, it is well versed, funny, thought out, and all in all one of the best KP stories i have had the distinct pleasure of reading. i hope the rest of it isn't stuck on some imaginary computer shelf never to be completed, but seeing how it wasn't updated since almost a year ago..
lol never mind, i'm going back to my complex numbers now.
again, great story, and, thank you for sharing it.

E. I'm with Yori on this one, scares me and makes me sad that in order to prove that she's not a villain, that's basically what KP is acting like. =/ Her and Ron really need to reunite soon.

"...And if I see you go for anything or press anything, or do anything that makes me twitchy, I’ll sic my ninja on you.”
“Grr,” said Yori.

XD heheh. I want my own grr-ing ninja.

Non-chapter 7 specific comments:
I liked how you found a way for Kim to get her S4 mission outfit, that was a nice nod there.
Also, way back at the beginning, you really got me with the Monique getting shot scene. I'd been having a feeling you were going to kill her off (please don't!) so I totally bought into that.
Sim's characterization still seems sort of shaky to me? Sometimes he talks just like a normal teenager, and then sometimes he's the loyal semi-innocent syntho drone. But I guess that could go with him being confused with his memories of the 'others.'
Really liked the 'deleted scene' from last chapter. Especially Ron being so oblivious to Monique's disembodied voice. XD

Hrmm. Ok, out of comments for now. I won't beg you to update soon, but please at least promise you will finish it eventually? It's too good to sit in limbo forever. =(

Ahh...I needed that. This was a very...enjoyable chapter. it was a bit awkward in places, but I'll get to that in due time. Most importantly, this chapter made my day; minor quibbles have no power over that.

I...wow. I can't believe you wrote a scene where Cameron Du wasn't a complete jerk. I liked this scene. I liked it a lot. Dini continues to be a breath of fresh air in a story chock full of recognizable names behaving in unrecognizable fashions. Great job describing Du's fatigue and frustration.

The next scene was good. The bit about the transmitter in the jungle was written particularly well. Also, Drakken discovering his lair was empty made me laugh. People looked at me. "Gene-A-Ma-Jig" is a brilliant name, and perfect for Drakken. The fake-out at the end of the scene was very good. I half believed it actually was another non-Ron.

This next scene is a bit odd, but...there's nothing really wrong with it. The hiding bit was described well, and I enjoyed Ron's last couple sentences of the scene, but...meh. Moving on.

Bwaha! Brilliant! I laughed so many times during the syntho-Kim scene. Syntho-Kim's one-liners were just so...perfect. "I’m Kim Possible, and I love to meddle in the affairs of my intellectual superiors." Ha! I love it. Kim's next murderous rage was...well, I liked it about as much as the last couple times it has come out, which is to say, not very much. But it was decent. Yori was almost not useless here. I hope she does that more often. You know, be not useless. Except for her first confrontation with Ron and Kim, she's been nothing but eye-candy (imagination-candy?) throughout this entire story. I really want to see her be more useful and impressive.

"Have you seen any boys? I love to love boys! But which one should I love to love the most?" Ha! The brilliance! It blinds me!

This next scene is kind of depressing. Reading it was like walking through the bad parts of Chicago or Detroit. Still, there was much brilliance to be had. Kelp Siren is...very intriguing. She should totally wear that outfit more. Or, you know, have Wade whip up one for her that is slightly less disgusting to wear, but has that same look. It goes very well with her complexion. And she looks totally hot in it. Well...in my head, anyway. Motor Ed is, was, and always will be great. Killigan was also a joy to read. Monkey Fist, though...well, I'll get to him the next time he comes up.

The first part of the next scene was quite impressive. I loved Dementor's fury. His put-down of Shego was uncalled for, but it worked well enough. Non-Ron disappoints me in not caving in his "father's" face here, but I suppose given his state of mind, what actually happened was a slightly more likely outcome. Slightly. Not nearly as satisfying, though. Then the scene changes, and, uhh...umm...well, okay. Shego goes crazy and has sex with non-Ron. How...unexpected? I...yeah. Anyway, it was written very well. Also, you made it sound like there is a bit of Shego DNA there in the mix, too. Ron, Kim, and Shego? That is one crazy mix of DNA for one little old non-Ron.

So, back to Monkey Fist. Holy crap! That was amazing! I absolutely love how you wrote his dialogue. Awesome. So awesome. There were a couple sentences in this scene where Motor Ed did not sound like Motor Ed, but for the most part it was a brilliant scene. Wade getting caught was...unsettling. It gave me a really bad feeling about what's about to go down in a chapter or three. Anyway, Ron outing himself was amusing, and I laughed when Motor Ed called for Kelp Siren to help. Seriously, though...Monkey Fist? Absolutely brilliant. Ron's jumping exit was really cool, too.

This post-coitus scene was very...interesting. Shego's "Don't know, I never checked" was hilarious. You made her first time sound like it was with Motor Ed, though. I doubt that is what you were really going for, but...heh...yeah. "Sim," eh? I suppose. I still prefer non-Ron. Anyway, "Sim's" little tantrum after Shego left was kinda pathetic, even for him. Also...Dementor did a great job of placating Sim without actually telling him anything. Anyway, the "plan" sounds promising. Forget all their grievances? So...is that some sort of forgetfulness ray, or is it like the attitudinator in ray form, or what? I don't recognize the little gun thing. But, let's see...hooked up to the entropy cannon, eh? So...entropy is a measure of the amount of thermal energy in a system that is unavailable for conversion to (often mechanical) work. Then there is an odd ray I don't recognize which MIGHT have something to do with the brain...hrm. Dementor is going to bring about the heat death of everyone's brains? I don't...I don't get it. I guess if the entropy cannon works like I think it might, and this new ray thingy does actually have something to do with the brain, he could cease all meaningful interaction between neurons, or something, but that seems unlikely as his overall goal. So maybe that ray gun doesn't have anything to do with the brain at all...but then why would Dementor choose the word "forget", unless it was...ohh, well, I suppose it could all be a ruse to throw us off the trail. Hrm. Hurry up and write another chapter so you can tell us what it is he's trying to do.

Yea. Kim is being a crazy, murderous bitch again. It's appropriate, I suppose, but...*shrug*...I guess I'm just not digging it at the moment. Anyway, this scene had two high-points. Drakken saying, "Clone Tube Three is missing? What happened to good old Threebie?" was one of them, and probably my favorite of the two. The second immediately followed the first, being the Doctor Director reveal there at the very end. That was...confusing. The scratch marks on the door to the place definitely reek of Shego, and from the lady Doctor D's wording, it almost sounds like they are in the GJ compound that Shego knocked over...but at the same time, why would she call it Project Sim Possible? Obviously GJ took this stuff from Drakken, but...now I'm wondering if the good Doctor was actually trying to run her own cloning program to produce supersoldiers using Drakken's work and Kim and Ron's DNA before Shego came along and took Threebie out from under her nose. It's possible she's actually working with Dementor, but that seems unlikely and boring. You wouldn't do anything boring with the plot, would you? Or, maybe that's just the name Drakken gave to it, and she's copying him, but that doesn't really work for wild speculation, so I'm-a gonna stick with options 1 and 2.

So, Shego stole good old Threebie, eh? Dementor used Threebie to create Sim Possible, who, along with Shego, is an integral part of his scheme. Shego also stole some ray gun of Drakken's...that's two things Drakken created being used in Dementor's plan. Then she was supposed to steal Drakken. Now she's off to steal Wade. Sounds like Dementor needs all kinds of help just to figure out one little plan.

So...yeah. That was very good. Now, make with Chapter 8 already!

O. Cliffhanger! Is Doctor Director in on Dementer's scheme? (Rhetorical question. You don't have to answer.) Nice chapter. I eagerly awaite the next one...and the moment when Kim and Ron finally reunite!

Okay, I've read your whole Trilogy, and am eagerly devouring every last word of this story too! Your writing just seems to get better and better with each chapter, your characterizations, your dialogue, even those spione tingling twists! They're all top notch! I await your next chapter with bated breath, =)

-Jawelik

I agree with Yori, Kim is flipping out...

Anyway, I really liked the bit with the villians on the island. Monkey Fist rambaling on about being the King of the Trees was great! Ron going crazy with MMP once again. Boy needs to learn some control.

I think the part with Shego and Sim was well executed. I especially liked Sim's reaction to it. And then Dementor sending his team after Wade, huh. Hells yes. That, and probably an influx of villians?

Solid all around. Too tired to leave much more then that though.

Hmm... by the time this is all over, Kim will have gone pretty far down the path of almost-villainy, I am thinking.

Also, the new Monkey Fist is extremely creepy. Even if the "Give me back my feet!" line is hilarious.

Thanks for another wonderful installment :)

That was AWESOME! The thing with Siren Kelp was hilarious. You kept each of the character's traits in line, and it made this chapter breathtaking. Kim is already just hanging on -which is why Ron is usually there to give her some Ronshine - and looks like shes in for an even rougher ride and discovery. I hope Ron,Wade, and Monique are okay...

Great stuff!!

Keep it up!

Pretty dire straits each has found themselves in here. Confrontations and exclamations all around.

Some threads of each far flung team are slowly pulling together, but man it's a slow process. Ron and Monique leaving Wade at Dementor's old broken lair, Kim, Yori, Hana, Rufus and Drakken at an old site of Drakken's with Dr Director waiting them, and a flurry of Dementor's posse off to encounter another part of his plan.

Looks like Shego blew off some steam with Sim, and he's going to have more confusion in his life to go with the plot he's been duped into taking part in.

From this ending, looks like GJ had an ace up their sleeve about Kim, or had knowledge of such a project...

And can Cam be anymore of a pumped up version of Will? Man that's arrogance on steroids. Too bad Dini was pulled further into his web of Du'ism, she had a chance to be a very good agent...

CB73

I think I've said this on my last review, but I'll say it again: your Kim is an awesome kick@ss bad@ass. And now with Sim Possible I and II and GJ maybe being involved with some cloning shenanigans? excellent. Yori notices that Kim's just holding on by a thread, and Doctor Director showing up may be the thing that finally sends Kim over the cliff, physically, mentally and emotionally. Looking forward to more - the archduke

Now that was a cliffhanger. That was a surprise.
Lots of action and drama. Kim sure looks like she could use some Ronshine. She seems stressed.

First off; w00t, we got an update!!

After being such a-holes in part 3, you still managed to make the villans human and still in character, great job. And the ending, wow! Now that's a plot twist! After this I'll be surprised if Kim doesn't drag Ron and Hana to some uninhabited, uncharted island. Pfft, allies are so over-rated.

Here's to chap. 8! Hope it doesn't take as long, but even if it takes longer, I'll be here, eager to read it!

Wow, A lot going on here and worth the wait. The villans seem to have fallen on hard times.Kim is getting more obsessed and Wade is now trapped. And now Kim is about to find out how her clone got started. I think Shego might have done something she didn't expect when she seduced the clone. Poor Ron's team is dwindeling by the day.

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter.