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Hikari no Mou Hitori no boku
2009-11-12 . chapter 15
's good, and i can tell ending uberly soon. bu~t you better update! you basically left in the middle of a lemon >< that's torture!
UPDATE!!
~Evelynn
Hikari no Mou Hitori no boku
2009-11-11 . chapter 14
lawl, that's a good excuse, drains are nasty! (i clean the bathroom i share with my brothers) and i do intend on reading chappie 15, but i just had to say that XD and i read "Subconscious Rejection" when al read it in this fic XD
~Evelynn
Elemantal Dragon
2009-06-22 . chapter 15
The last word...X3 ok, updates are highly looked foreward to! I love how your chapters are not extensivly long! Keep up the good work!
Bad Luck Walking
2008-07-10 . chapter 15
Excellent!
I can just imagine Al at the end, standing in the bathroom, holding up jar of vaseline, with a creepy grin plastered across his face.
"Brother!"
-snortgiggle-

-Tora
Consciously Comatose
2008-04-25 . chapter 15
Oh, Al seme? Wow, nice! Love it!
Kitsunea-chan
2008-01-29 . chapter 15
Vaseline to the rescue! I love this story, its really good!
AnthesLoveFullmetal
2007-12-21 . chapter 15
whyY! you dtoped it jusst before it got good!!
plleaasassee update the suspence is KILLI NG me!
KajiMori
2007-12-18 . chapter 15
I really like it. ^_^ The entire story is awesome, but the multi-chapter lemon makes it even better. Hope to read more of this soon!
EmoNekoNinja
2007-12-10 . chapter 15
Ugh...no! i need teh updates!! please! this is an awesome story! and u cliffed it at the bestest part!
unfortunateforever
2007-12-10 . chapter 15
Oh my gosh, I can't even tell you how excited I was when I saw this chapter in my inbox. Squee! I can't wait for the next one. Ed and Al are so cute and innocent when it comes to being intimate with each other. *fangirl squeal* I worship you!
gothboymylove
2007-12-10 . chapter 15
Forgot to say:

PLEASE UPDATE SOON, MY INNER FANGIRL IS SCREAMING!

Also, I read this story at the risk of losing my beloved Gothboy, lol (he hates this pairing), so I think you should update real soon, and make me happy!
gothboymylove
2007-12-10 . chapter 14
lol, poor Ed and Al, nothin' ever goes right for them, does it?

p.s I thought Ed's hair getting stuck in the drain was so funny, lol

This is a really good story, the characteristics are good as is the flow of the story. Loved it xD
Emria
2007-12-10 . chapter 15
NO! JUST RIGHT THERE! YOU CUT THE SCENE RIGHT IN THE MIDDLE OF THE HOT YAOINES! MY INNER FANGIRL DIED RIGHT THERE!DX DX DX DX DX! HELP! the only way 4 u 2 revive me is writing the next chapper and quickly or i'll die slowly by the hands of A MONKEY WITH A BUTTER KNIFE!! THY'RE LETHAL U KNOW SO HELP ME!
Sincerly Emria
fuyu-no-tsuki
2007-10-23 . chapter 14
Yes! Want lemony goodness! (Showers are great ^^)
KidVivi
2007-10-18 . chapter 14
O...Why did you stop there, right at the good part? >|

Heh. I don't like that doctor. I have a feeling he's going to try and hurt the brothers somehow, though I really doubt it. xD

I can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon, ne?
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