 Hikari no Mou Hitori no boku 2009-11-12 . chapter 15's good, and i can tell ending uberly soon. bu~t you better update! you basically left in the middle of a lemon >< that's torture!
UPDATE!!
~Evelynn |
 Hikari no Mou Hitori no boku 2009-11-11 . chapter 14lawl, that's a good excuse, drains are nasty! (i clean the bathroom i share with my brothers) and i do intend on reading chappie 15, but i just had to say that XD and i read "Subconscious Rejection" when al read it in this fic XD
~Evelynn |
 Elemantal Dragon 2009-06-22 . chapter 15The last word...X3 ok, updates are highly looked foreward to! I love how your chapters are not extensivly long! Keep up the good work! |
 Bad Luck Walking 2008-07-10 . chapter 15Excellent!
I can just imagine Al at the end, standing in the bathroom, holding up jar of vaseline, with a creepy grin plastered across his face.
"Brother!"
-snortgiggle-
-Tora |
 Consciously Comatose 2008-04-25 . chapter 15Oh, Al seme? Wow, nice! Love it! |
 Kitsunea-chan 2008-01-29 . chapter 15Vaseline to the rescue! I love this story, its really good! |
 AnthesLoveFullmetal 2007-12-21 . chapter 15whyY! you dtoped it jusst before it got good!!
plleaasassee update the suspence is KILLI NG me! |
 KajiMori 2007-12-18 . chapter 15I really like it. ^_^ The entire story is awesome, but the multi-chapter lemon makes it even better. Hope to read more of this soon! |
 EmoNekoNinja 2007-12-10 . chapter 15Ugh...no! i need teh updates!! please! this is an awesome story! and u cliffed it at the bestest part! |
 unfortunateforever 2007-12-10 . chapter 15Oh my gosh, I can't even tell you how excited I was when I saw this chapter in my inbox. Squee! I can't wait for the next one. Ed and Al are so cute and innocent when it comes to being intimate with each other. *fangirl squeal* I worship you! |
 gothboymylove 2007-12-10 . chapter 15Forgot to say:
PLEASE UPDATE SOON, MY INNER FANGIRL IS SCREAMING!
Also, I read this story at the risk of losing my beloved Gothboy, lol (he hates this pairing), so I think you should update real soon, and make me happy! |
 gothboymylove 2007-12-10 . chapter 14lol, poor Ed and Al, nothin' ever goes right for them, does it?
p.s I thought Ed's hair getting stuck in the drain was so funny, lol
This is a really good story, the characteristics are good as is the flow of the story. Loved it xD |
 Emria 2007-12-10 . chapter 15NO! JUST RIGHT THERE! YOU CUT THE SCENE RIGHT IN THE MIDDLE OF THE HOT YAOINES! MY INNER FANGIRL DIED RIGHT THERE!DX DX DX DX DX! HELP! the only way 4 u 2 revive me is writing the next chapper and quickly or i'll die slowly by the hands of A MONKEY WITH A BUTTER KNIFE!! THY'RE LETHAL U KNOW SO HELP ME!
Sincerly Emria |
 fuyu-no-tsuki 2007-10-23 . chapter 14Yes! Want lemony goodness! (Showers are great ^^) |
 KidVivi 2007-10-18 . chapter 14O...Why did you stop there, right at the good part? >|
Heh. I don't like that doctor. I have a feeling he's going to try and hurt the brothers somehow, though I really doubt it. xD
I can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon, ne? |