i...i...i ah...i'm speechless. absolutely completely drowning in the sweetness and the fluffiness,my story is nothing beside urs. i loved the beginning of chapter 1,"Right now, her eyes were focusing in and out as she closed them, then opened them. The world was spinning and too small, it closed in on her, her chest didn’t have enough room to expand with each breath. She struggled to move, fighting against the fabrication of the universe, stuck to her fix, moving with it." dat was da best. well ttfn!

RD~

liked the second way better than the first. James is wonderful. uber. x10.

well, i read it as i said i would. and earlier than i thought. and you know, i might go back and review to the first chap too if this one doesnt turn out long enough. but gimme a minute to see if it does.
...

well you, lil missy, brought me completely off my normal ship. you pulled me off of any katie ships and swam me all the way over to this one. and although ill certainly swim abck to my comfort zone, this was incredibly delightful. i truly loved it. the first chapter was so racy it blew my mind. ok, it wasnt ALL that racy but i really wasnt expecting it from you. im not being mean or pretentious about it cause gods know ive only written once racy thing, but still. just wow. like WOW. it was fab. absolutely fab and i loved it.

then their bickering was as awesome as bickering goes. james is so adorable at the moment you have no idea. i norm dont like harry in fics, but i love james. i think its one of those things where its bad to mess with main characters but secondary characters you can contort and jazz. you know? either way thats my reason for katie ships but yeah...moving on.

STILL FABULOUS!
and did you go in like backwards order? either way i loved the layout, it was fabulous. and the whole addict thing, i loved that too. cause at first i assumed she was addicted to james and then you went on about highes and not breathing and everything like that and i was like, oh damn, lilys stoned. hahahaha, it was truly a brilliant way of depicting it. I LOVED IT (cause apparently i cant say that enough)

ok, im thinking this is long enough because my fingers are starting to complain and yeah, im gonna wrap up here and give them a well deserved break.

but seriously, so glad i got to read this so soon, it WAS fantastic.

lots o love!

I liked this chapter better than the first one, but the story was really good. Thank-you for writing about James and Lily, they're definitely my favourite topic.