|Reviews for Wave On Wave|
| Sta 3/16/13 . chapter 1
| KimCSI 7/20/08 . chapter 1
Simply beautiful :)
| toothchick 4/23/08 . chapter 1
I loved this part:
...“I guess we never really know some people. Or know how they feel about us.”
“That’s true. You for one have no idea.”
Also loved the 12:10, it is tomorrow
| mysterious-song 3/19/08 . chapter 1
a BIG smile on my face after that well done. Loved it.
| chirachi 6/26/07 . chapter 1
Ah... the end is sweet!
x chirachi, A GSR writer.
| Klee Wyck 6/23/07 . chapter 1
I think I might cry. This was completely, utterly, totally beautiful. I wanted to quote a few of my favourite lines, but I may as well just re-quote the entire story. Your minimalistic style, your keen observation of their relationship, all so realistic. Brilliant.
| KneeDeepinInk 6/23/07 . chapter 1
Your words flow well and you stayed true to the characters. I can really imagine that this is actually how it could have been. Thanks for adding to the mystery...
| xxakp 6/23/07 . chapter 1
can't wait to read more from you!
| PurplePopple 6/23/07 . chapter 1
It might be a halfway decent story but for me, as a reader, it just doesn't work. The story is written in present tense. I haven't been able to figure out why and the story doesn't explain why this style choice was made. The grammar is off, the rules aren't followed in terms of dialog. Example: “I’ll leave you in peace.” He says, Should be: “I’ll leave you in peace,” he says, End example. I just can't get past this style decision to read much of it. Perhaps, the next time you write a piece in first person, you can include an author note explaining that decision in the context of your story? So it will make more sense?
| Andsowego 6/23/07 . chapter 1
Loved it! Thanks for sharing your preoccupation :) We could all use more of these stories to make it through the summer.
| regan666 6/23/07 . chapter 1
aw that was sweet , really good story thank you for sharing :-)