A great story. Very good.

Aw...that was soo sad! but good job writing it!

really good

Nice one-shot. For some reason, I really felt sorry for Luke during the part when Owen told him real parents were dead (although, in reality, only one is).

Wow.. Tis is amazing.. Kid Luke asking about his Daddy and Leia.. this just.. wow!

Fascniating...


And so veyr captivating, and veyr realistic to what might have happended. What everybody else had to go through, what Anakin (Vader) and Padme missed with these specail twins. i also liked the force usage for Leia becasue she does have it. She enever used it, but she did.

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Great Job. There aren't very many young Luke and Leia stories out there. It was so god. Are you sure you don't want to continue?

Cute one-shot! But, whatever happened to that Caitlin care-taker girl?? she seemed pretty cool ("i need a drink!") LoL. good job though, poor owen and beru int he beginning!! :-)

Very very good. ;) *faves*

Wow. Amazing one-shot! :D I love the part where Leia levitated the bottle of Jawa Juice.. hehe. She's a Skywalker, alright.

Both the portrayals of Luke & Leia as they found out were stunning, but also heartbreaking. Just beautiful.

Excellent job! :D