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| JEFF HARDY FAN31 2008-07-17 ch 1, | abuseGreat first chapter, I can't wait to read more. Update soon please. Dani |
| Katine 2007-09-23 ch 1, | abuseHi, You write very well. The characters are believable and very much in character. I really like your stories, and they're good english too :) Keep writing. |
| Jmarit17 2007-06-28 ch 1, | abuseBrilliant! I love the banter. It's great :D Can't wait to read more :) ~Kellie |
| megliz716 2007-06-28 ch 1, | abuseThis is good so far. I can't wait to see what happens next! |
| allovertheplace 2007-06-28 ch 1, | abuseek!! i love this story! i can´t wait for a update.. this sounds great so far and i really really really love that u aren´t making tristan into a sappy lovesick puppy!! update soon!! |
| Nicole Kathrine 2007-06-27 ch 1, | abuseLoved it can't wait to rad more update ASAP! |
| rrainyddaze 2007-06-27 ch 1, | abusei loved it... this isnt a one-shot is it? because i really hope you continue! anyway, update soon! please and thank you! |
| Curley-Q 2007-06-25 ch 1, | abusegreat |
| KT 2007-06-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseI'm very interested in the story. I hope you continue! |
| Tara 2007-06-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was great! You wrote it so well. I especially loved how you didnt make him the sappy forever inlove, willing to change for Rory, Tristan. And your introduction was brilliant, as was your dialogue. Great work, well done! |
| StarAngel148 2007-06-23 ch 1, | abuseContinue soon. |
| JustPeachy123 2007-06-23 ch 1, | abuseOMG I lovelovelove it!! More, please. :) |