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pinkkatsyah 2008-03-11 ch 8, anon.	abuseYour shorts are one of the best I've read in such a long time. Filled with little bits of endearing humour and feelings that are well expressed through the words. I've learnt new words too! XD With regards to tocophobia (new word! yay!), Chapter 3 was ,what I feel, not well thought out. Especially the sudden attack by Dante on the anniversary. The scene was too sudden to happen. Also I believe that Lady should leave (If you want this to end quickly) or she could stay and try to relieve Dante's mind a bit. Anyway I see it, that Dante's gonna turn out to be bitter and grumpy despite what Lady's going to do. It depends whether you want to be cruel to Dante and give him kindness that she never meant to give or give half-heartedly (I feel like this is the bad ending for a bad h-game) or let Lady be kind and let Dante sort it out himself (which might just lead to his self-destruction and Lady acting cold and inconsiderate). I apologize if this doesn't seem to make much sense, cos i'm in the middle of a report which just doesn't want to get done. Anyway I'm looking forward to the next chapter! ^_^
MindAsylum 2008-02-17 ch 7,	abuseI have to say I'm very impressed. Most people don't give this much thought to Dante's character, as much of it's potential is untapped by its own franchise. As for my opinion on what to do, I find it's best to listen to your own instincts as far as plot direction is concerned, but since you're asking, I think she should stay. It's hard for me to imagine her leaving him at this point, as she has so much emotionally invested in him, not to mention the sense of responsibility she feels for him. Don't keep us waiting too long, now ;)
MindAsylum 2008-02-17 ch 8,	abuseDamn this is great stuff. I can't wait to read more.
Brukaoru 2008-02-02 ch 8,	abuseIt's hard to say what I want Lady to do. I really think it should be you, the author, who decides what happens next. If I give my opinion, I'm afraid it would be quite biased since I'm not a fan of the pairing. Just to let you know, if it wasn't for your writing I would never have read these chapters with this pairing. I hope you know that you are an excellent writer and have a great talent here. :)
Brukaoru 2008-02-02 ch 7,	abusePoor Vergil, can you blame him? I can't say I can. That chapter wasn't weird, it makes a lot of sense. Awesome work! :D
Brukaoru 2008-02-02 ch 6,	abuseMwah, a very cute chapter. I love the ending! XD A few spelling mistakes but nothing major. Awesome work.
Brukaoru 2008-02-02 ch 5,	abuseMay I ask a question? You say you don't like the Dante and Lady pairing, which I do not either. So who do you like him to be paired with? Anyway, there are some people who want to bash something without any facts to back their selves up. The fact that fanfiction is just that: FICTION. You can take any characters and make them OOC all you want, because it's fiction. Made up. Great writing, as usual.
Brukaoru 2008-02-02 ch 4,	abuseDon't apologize for it being too fluffy, it was really cute. I loved it. The description of Dante and Vergil were perfect and I can see where Eva would be more curious about Sparda. Awesome work.
Brukaoru 2008-02-02 ch 3,	abuseCan't say I'm a fan of Lady and Dante, but I cannot deny a good plot and great writing when I see it. Well done.
Brukaoru 2008-02-02 ch 2,	abuseShort but fantastic!
Brukaoru 2008-02-02 ch 1,	abuseBeautifully written. You really captured the emotions Dante felt, it really did bring tears to my eyes. Spelling and grammar are excellent. I can't wait to read more :D
Vampire Queen 2008-01-31 ch 8,	abuseAh Jesus! If Dante had asked me to say there with him, oh...wanders off in thought...ANYWHO! Lovely chapter! I'm so glad that you updated after so long, but I'm glad you did. And I can understand that life gets in the way of writing, don't beat yourself up for having some gaps in between the dates of chapter posting.
...Wow 2008-01-28 ch 8, anon.	abuse...Damn...Tocophobia could be it's own, absolutely amazing, angst story. Here I was in the mood for a good angst one shot, and found 3 fantastic chapters to it, this really is a fantastic story I love the resounding hurt from Lady's unwillingness to accept Dante's child because of it's demon blood, but her out right concern and almost affection for Dante himself... Please please please continue this
inujak 2008-01-23 ch 8,	abuseI demand that she stays. I can't read another depressing fic were Dante gets drunk and lady just leaves. She must stay. Great fic byw.
.Brown.eyes.and.bushy.tales 2008-01-23 ch 8,	abuseThat! I mean...so.. there's no words for it, so I'll simplify it for myself. GREAT!

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